All Comments on 'Fifty-Three Dollars'

Good story, made me smile, just wish I had a spare fifty three dollars!!!

It is nice to read about a healthy relationship for a change! This genre needs a lot more of these!

of keeping it all in the family. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for the great story! Truly enjoyable form start to finish

A pleasent and welcome change.

Good tale, mice to see someone happy in America

I was on a roller coaster ride with this story waiting for the other shoe to drop and fortunately it never did. Thanks for a good read.

Your submissions are always great. I was worried for a moment that this was going to have some sort of a tragic ending, but was happy to see that it all came out good in the end. Please continue with more good ones like this.

Cracking tale of a real loving couple.

and this is an example of why I like to read JPB. He writes many types of Loving wives stories to keep us entertained from Loving wives, whores, sluts, repentant/unrepentant women to husbands that take revenge, dont give a fuck, like it, are unaware, wimps, etc.......

your story entertained me so very well Masde a nice puddle thank you

DAMSEL Approved

the master proves that he is the master, A writer who can write about gangbangs and eating creampies can also write about everyday people who are sane, logical and simply normal. maybe the story lacked a little bet of drama but it was fun to read and i finished it feeling good and at peace with the world. Thanks for sharing.

I think all that needs to be said is that it's JPG...

Just Plain Good

5/5

Another good read from JPB keep up the good work.

JPB, congrats, you have produced another terrific story.

I enjoyed the fascinating characters you created.

I hated how believable the conduct you described is for your characters.

I could believe in this storyline and how well driven is the plot.

I cringe when good characters are entrapped in believable jeopardy.

I know I am invested in excellent imagineering when I hope for a sequel.

I hate the thought of a sequel for it would take a diabolical danger to continue a story this good.

JPB, congrats, you have produced another terrific story.

I enjoyed the fascinating characters you created.

I hated how believable the conduct you described is for your characters.

I could believe in this storyline and how well driven is the plot.

I cringe when good characters are entrapped in believable jeopardy.

I know I am invested in excellent imagineering when I hope for a sequel.

I hate the thought of a sequel for it would take a diabolical danger to continue a story this good.

A fantastic storyline and a well written story with very solid characers that brought the story to life and a very believable read.

Well done Bob.

Thanks for the read.

Don't get comments from anonymous trolls? We need more stories like this - those that show the other side of LOVING wives. One of your better ones JPB

thanks for a good read. we can learn from the mistakes of the past. glad she found a man that loved her enough to not be worried about her past. good that she really did learn and change. thanks again

Thanks.

I just love it when assholes get their dicks cut (mostly) off 1 inch at a time! Almost as good when assholes are convinced that's gonna happen to them! Leaving town was probably a very good idea!

5*

Reap what you sow...

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

DD

Excellent execution. And no cheating. I like it.

By the way, can you break a hundred?

Like some other comments I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop; I kept wondering with all those nights out bowling if she had something unpleasant on the side that would ruin the relationship. That would have made this a terrible story since I immediately liked both characters and heartily approved of what was happening. I almost stopped reading it because of that. I'm glad I saw it through. Damn, I have four daughters; the nighttime story telling, the 'happy meals', playing war; Melanie was headed for a happy growing up; the idea of wrecking that was just a little scary. You did OK on this one JPB! Definitely a fiver. I do prefer a good Camero though.

After wird , thougtbu might take a break. Wird was great this was better. Keep m coming JPB .

And most beautiful stories I've ever read on this site. Lots more like this Bob! And to think i almost stopped reading in disgust when he said that sweet little Melanie didn't know which side of the plate to put the fork! Six years old and she doesnt know basic etiquette? Oh the horror of it all! By the way, this has to be the FIRST story in the loving wives section that actually HAD a loving wife in it. 'Bout damn time!

So glad it stayed happy to the end.

I agree with @Tim413413...One of the best of JPB...4*...Easily in LW or Romance...

Things work out best when people are honest with those they love and work together toward common goals.

It is a shame, though, that so little asshole blood was spilled. Maybe some sequels about encounters with less cooperative guys from her past...

When she told him about what a slut see was I was afraid he was going to bail ship. Glad that he stuck with it. No sense paying to see the tattoo on the back of a married woman. Too many single girls will show you for free.

... Fast read with a believable characters and story line, many thanks for the story from the Panther fan.

it took courage for her to open up about her past. almost as hard as it would be for him to accept it without dwelling on it.

Bitchin story, the sex scenes were good, the story was good, but the ending was just Bitchin, I laughed my ass off !!!

JPB writes some bad ones (unfinished) and good ones. This one showcased his enviable storytelling skills. Really a ROMANCE with with enough embellishments, eg car restoration and flashbacks to her wild days, to add spice and color.

But what was that tattoo? Do I HAVE to pay $53? Come on, go easily on me.

Paul in Oklahoma

That story is the reason his fans but up with his fumbles. This an example of Bob at his best.

Well, damnit.....I loved this one!

At long last, a decent story.

Another well used flesh sleeve / it does have a life span/ I would say hers was near the Salvaged vehicle side of warrantee amazed at how one can reclaim life after such a horrible start ? Nothing I would want to use / would he purchase a vehicle with that much use on it where talking about ridden hard and put away wet >

When you finish a story it usually means it's a good one and this is no exception. Really liked it. I don't know where you get your imagination as you constantly come up with interesting and very readable stories. One suggestion is that you revisit your back catalogue and write endings to some of your stories where you have left us hanging. Most are too good to leave unfinished. 5 stars for this one.

where she goes and tell her husband right away, she doesn't fuck the first. she and her husband handle it together.

Best story so far. A story that leaves the reader feeling good.

Loved every second of reading this one. 5*

For a while there I was thinking "uh oh" another cuckolded sucker. But Mon showed her best qualities and did good. Despite her slut history, she's a keeper!

Now how can I get her cheat on him with me?

AN EXCELLENT STORY. FROM BEGINNING TO END.

5 Stars for your writing. Not sure I could live with her past as a total slut!!!

Pressuring woman into marriage is not exactly great idea. The reason is not that she would get scared, though she might, but that one makes impression of being needy which is the first step of submission that will likely lead to being manipulated.

I do like hints of violence, most normal males react that way. I am getting tired of all those moronic "I saw them, I got weak on my knees, I run out and cried" stories in LW. I don't know whether all these old geezer authors are wimps or they just follow "no violence rule" on LW.

Iffy,works in an estate agent,single mother,bowls three times a week,reads two books a week,how many hours are in her week?.Also how did she get her skin tight jeans off with her heels on?.

This is a "Best of JPB" story!

Really liked this one. 5 stars from me

Brilliant! Loved it! 10☆

Great one, JPB, thanks for sharing.

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Very long, very detailed in the build up but good, it made me laugh at the end