All Comments on 'Fiji Baby'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome

This is just as hot as the first episode, and I do hope that you give us a third to follow. Excellent story, well written and hot sex. More please.

GentleVikingGentleVikingabout 13 years ago
Oooh yes...

Way to go. Can't wait to hear about Lucy moving to Kiwi land.

den_tigerden_tigerabout 13 years ago
Finally! Even better than the first

I never thought we'd see a sequel.

It was worth the wait.

Even better than the first.

Can we expect a trilogy?

bosombuddiesbosombuddiesover 12 years ago
Incredible descriptions, hot situations

You do a fantastic job making readers feel like we're really there.

anubeloreanubeloreabout 9 years ago
I haven't read the rest yet, but I had to comment on this

Yes. Lucy IS a fucking hypocrite. It's that simple. How does Peter (or Becca) know that Lucy's husband's infidelity wasn't equally "cosmically ordained"? How? He doesn't/they don't. Lucy is a hypocritical asshole, plain and simple. Her husband is well rid of her. Good for him, I say, giving her a taste of her own medicine. Seems she disliked it.

Now I can finally read the rest. Sorry, but that pissed me off. Adultery is adultery. Even if the cosmos "ordains" it. I wonder if Peter would be so blase about it if the "cosmos ordained" that Becca (and maybe Lucy) was fated to fuck another man, passionately, decadently, whilst on vacation. I somehow doubt it.

-Anubelore

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