All Comments on 'Finally Fulfilled'

The dialogue is so unnatural. "Your pussy is so incredibly tight. Wrapped around my dick like this, your pussy feels incredible." Who in the world actually talks like that when they're having sex? "He kept finger her." Poor grammar. Use an editor the next time, but do keep trying!

Hi You that left the message. Why don't you go find another job. ProfLoveLost forget The English Teacher there and keep on writing the way You enjoy doing it. i gave you a 5 in which I think was not enough for a great story. Where is the rest of it? There has to be more of it pleaseeeeee?

no anticipation or buildup