by Otazel
You did a wonderful job. You reached into the mind of a new submissive and allowed her to push herself to the end. You gave her power and showed the truth of where the power lies.
Bravo.
This story had meaning other than just being a fuck story. I could almost feel the pain and pleasure. Well written.
your story is very well written! thank you for explicitly sharing the complexities of blending pleasure and pain
so erotically and so beautifully.
what an experience to read.i dream of finding just
such a partner.one who gives willingly,and doesn't judge.
what a gift they give to the other.allowing their partner to explore who they are deep inside.such a
beautiful job,Otazel.once again bravo.
Lovely, just lovely. I am sending it to three of my subs to warm them up for later. But I also use needles. And with one, the true masochist in the group, nails. Sometimes finishing nails and sometimes carpentry nails. Their names are Faith, Paula, and Tori. The latter two are featured on my Lit site under my name Sassy Susan. They are shown there as Cum Slut Cathy and Fuck Toy Tori in the Sorority Sisters series.
Thank you,
Susan
(sxysassysusan@aol.com)
Well written and stimulating at times. The ending weaker than the body of the story.
I understand her need to try it but I sure as hell wouldn't do it!! Keep writing!