All Comments on 'Finding her Father'

Stylish and sexy and so believable with your writing.

This needs further development.

one of the best father-daughter stories I've read, the only thing that would have made it better would have been a trace of blood from her broken cherry because the story already made her seem like a virgin

NEEDS a part 2

continue until prego

I hope there a chapter two!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent

Hoping you decide to continue it! Still great!

Was a perfect story