All Comments on 'Finding Kim Again'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
ok tale

ok tale but it would have been a real romance tale if it was a one and done

porn shot for them. her fake boobs is so yesterday . the prego film

is not for everyone. one word at his work and he would be fired. no romance

tale.

trigudistrigudisover 7 years ago
It Falls Flat

Not a romance tale, more a tale of eroticism. It lacks depth of feeling, longing, the sort of emotion that is the stuff of real romance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Is that it?

Seems to me that something is missing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I downgraded this one full grade ...

.. because it is not Romance and was a waste of my time reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What happens next?

It's a pity you left it unfinished. It needs a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Definetly needs another chapter to finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
agreed with trigudis

Not a romance. Flat.

OvercriticalOvercriticalalmost 4 years ago
Amazing!

How anyone could put "pen to paper" and come up with the most ridiculous story I've ever read on Literotica is just amazing. And this got a 4.2* average. I was being generous with a 2*. How any author would think that a reasonable, relatively shy guy could make a life with a breast enhanced porn star is beyond me. This isn't fantasy - it's nonsense.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

Needs another chapter! The story is good but not great .AAA++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ugh, that was... Just not good... There's way too much baggage piled on top of more baggage on top of more baggage and this guy is fine with it... I mean it's just too over the top.

NitpicNitpicalmost 2 years ago
What

What sort of parents marry their daughter off to a porn film maker Also,why did Kim take part in them,the fact she was a porn makers wife didn't mean she had to star in them.?The fact she did should have made him send her away.

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

Just too trite. What normal working in a private company wants to star publically in a porn movie?

He’d be sacked so quickly and blacklisted in his industry so fast it wouldn’t be funny.

3/5 for the pure teenage porn fantasy.

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