by DG Hear
It was a fun, rewarding read. A bit predictable, but it was all good predictions.
Nice effort!
Regards, Jack
Again you have done it. I look forward to every installment of your stories and when they end I find that I am sad because it like saying goodbye to people that I know.
I love your stories and this one is no exception. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.
Just like finishing a fine meal, this was a very good ending. I like your style of writing. Keep them coming and I'll keep reading them. Thank you for a wonderful story. Luis
Thank you so much,DG.This is the type of story we all need once in awhile.It really lifts the spirits.
A really great Romance, as one comment stated a real chick-flick and tear jerker. You do an exceptional job. There are no real surprises just a lot of passion in these characters. Your writing puts me in with the actions of the characters. That’s what a good Author will do is put you in the picture he is painting.<P>Thank you again for the wonderful entertainment.<P>PT
DG, You have a God given talent. Too often, anymore, writers try to make things too complicated. Your stories are uplifting. Thanks
Thank you so much DG for yet another exceptionally well-written story - really one of your best. I was hooked all the way through! A super tale with the kind of happy ending I look forward to and love. I always look forward to great stories from DG Hear and I can't wait to read the next. Yes full marks - any suggestions for improvement would be superfluous - to me it couldn't be better! A devoted fan, Pete.
DG I really think that this story was the Best ever written.
Atlanta,Ga
AS always. I really enjoy your stories, they are always great. I look forward to more.
D G, your writing is so effective and fun to read. I don't think I have ever NOT completed one of your works, reading nonstop to the end. Never had the motivation to do that for any author until now. Keep it up, tou are truly a master wordsmith.
You might be the best Romance writer on Literotica. This story, and your other one, A Second Chance, are two of the best I've read. You have a talent, a very good one.
It was really good, i.ve read lots of stories on this site, but yours is the first one which made me express my feelings real loud. It's beautifully written. It really gives me hope to dream. You're right, true love needs no chains, if you love someone, just let them be free, they'll definitely come back if you two are destined to be together.
I had to comment on this story as it brought tears to my eyes when she realized Jim was laid up in the hospital she worked at. What a great read .. I highly recommend it.
I read, and re-read your stories and always come back for more.
Thank you and those that support you for your effort and creativity!
Theodora, Justinianus and Belizar were friends and Theodora was a prostitute. If the plague and climate catastropha did not arrive they three would refound the Roman Empire in the VI Century. The Justinianus the Emperor never had talked his wife past. Theodora was a great Empess beside his husband.
It is an eternal true that it is the important where you go to and not where you come from.
If you read this story, I suggest to read from misterstan "Seven Facts About Your Wife" on the LW section and after it you should reread this story again. Second meaning of DGHear's story will understand well.
Against the American way of saying "A cheater is always cheater", we (Hungarians) have a way of saying (very interesting) From the BEST WHORE will be the BEST WIFE. This Hungarian way of saying does not say every whore, but the BEST. What a different. DG Hear has 2 excellent escort girl stories, this is one of them. The second is "Built on Lies". Both stories are an excellent example of this Hungarian way of saying..............
and apologize, but you don't have to be wimpy about it. you fell in love with her..well ok...but blaming yourself for saying what was in your mind, it is kind of too much, she was a whore when you met her, so the outburst is directed at her because you dont know her enough to trust her and all you know is that she is a whore, and it was directed at yourself for falling for such a woman, however, you fell for her,,,ok,,,good for you,,,but calling yourself an ass and all the other things because you told a whore that she is a whore is way too much.
I hope that the Hungarians and not the Rednecks have it right! In that case there is a reason to struggle to improve. I know that there are good historical reasons (Calvinism) but the determinism in much modern USA still leaves me sad since it says there no use trying to improve. Sue, in the story, pointed out that one key could be doing the job for the sake of survival and not together with alcohol and drugs.
The story was a truly fine read. I was the first to comment on the first chapter many years ago and do not remember why I did not comment on the other two chapters, a situation which had to be rectified..
So the doctors "induced a comma!" I hear they often do that, especially when there's a problem with the colon.
All the advice is solid and the people were winners -
You done fine!!
I wondered where you would go with this story, and you surpassed anything I could have imagined. A "5". Thank you.
when I read this I thought of the song "I found my sweetheart Sally"
God brought her back to me. What she has been, what she has done, I never care to know—because to me, she'll always be as pure as driven snow.
No, I don't wish my wife had been an escort once, but I'm glad it worked in your story, and I hope it has worked in real life for real people. I don't think I could have been as open minded and generous as Jim. But then I found my Angel without having to go through his drama and trauma. I enjoyed reading about their journey to find love and happiness. Thank You for brightening our lives.
I've read a lot of your stories with mixed opinions but this one was definitely the best. I do have a few reservations of a girl working for an escort service even to finance collage but it was a necessary part of this story.
BUT 2 points 1: There is no such thing as a nurse with a physical therapy specialty. they are two TOTALLY different fields in medicalPERIOD 2: there is NO NECESSITY in the usa to become a SLUT so you can go to school or eat. escorts are the scum of the earth, at least other whores are just trying to buy drugs/survive. I would much rather NEVER graduate or take 10 years than be a skank slut and lose my self worth.
but glad in the end he did not find her...who wants to get serious with a fuck slut whore like her...too many men marry hookers and escorts after college never knowing what sluts the women really were and probably still are fucking behind hubbies back...their excuse being it paid for college....get real you tramps...you just liked fucking for the money....
Sometimes it is true the old newspaper's saying the news is the postman bites the dog. Here the the woman character was the exception who avoided to became slut/whore against being escort. DGHear showed the sister of the male character who told the shadow side of the escort job.
It may be she could be the escort character from FrancisMacomber's story (LW) "The Honey Trap".
Whores are hard bitten and cold.
This was a nice fantasy though.
What a lovely story. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanx. 5*s. for all three parts.
I see that you haven't put anything on here for a while. I hope that means you are now a book published author, not just sick or injured. I'm fairly a new reader. I read a lot now as an 88 year old widower. Especially during this virus 19 when even my library is closed. Thank you for posting here. I love a good story, even with tears in my eyes. Thank you again. /s/ JustJay
I loved the story, yes she was an escort, but out of necessity as she too was a college student. As for those with negative comments they must not believe in true love. Like they say, do not judge a book by its cover. The storyline was great and it was serendipity that brought them back together. The end was great with that new family and the happily ever after. Well done, 5 stars
Great story series...it was amazing how they both fell in love with each other and didn't realize it until it was almost too late. I knew, or at least I hoped that he would meet Angel(Marie) at the hospital, and he did. Great story 5 *
Another great story I am slowly working my way thru your catoloque Keep up the good work (jaybee186)
This chapter is a definite 5* (as were the previous two chapters) and together they form a masterpiece. Thank you.
BJ
Beautiful story, well plotted and well written. Very hard to stop reading it. I also appreciated that all three chapters were completed before the first one was posted so there was not a long time between posting each one, A romance in the best sense of he word.
It is difficult to undestand sometimes life is not 100 % equal 100% sure. Not 100% escorts remain 100% whores forever in the life. I think the true life shows this well. One of the victims of the Alaskan serial killer who was succesful to avoid the death and she helped the police to arrest the serial killer, she was a beginer prostitute. The serial killer killed prostitutes and he dag them in Alaska. This woman became wife with 3 kids in Alaska.
It may be that Alaskan woman was succesful to stop that life, because the male surplus in Alaska, but she left the street or bars forever. Angel left that life forever because his aim was not the street, but to be a health work expert.
Another great story! I’ve now read every story you’ve posted and liked them all! I must say that my favorite is the one with Rob & Kayla and the “April Fool’s Day” background.