All Comments on 'Fire on the Dancefloor'

Very sexy tale. Thanks for the great read.

5-stars.

Yes, the seduction highly erotic just as you intended. And the ending nice, even a bit poignant. Sure, could have developed both women, but why — perfect erotic short story. Surely you will share Nikkie with us again. Love her confident sensual personality. 5 stars.

Very enjoyable and on the whole a realistic and believable story. I would like to read more about both women going forward, espescially Louise. How does she handle her new found sexuality? I think there is the makings of a story there.

Hot and neat. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing

This is just elitist nonsense. Your VIPism as means of social and sexual credibility robs you of any value. You are a worm.

Great story Nikki, shame that these two didn’t continue and you provide more details of their relationship and love-making. It would have made an enjoyable series