All Comments on 'Fireworks Time'

31,000 views and not a single comment? Well done for a stroke story. Not a whole lot of tension, but that's not what you were going for was it? Feel a bit bad for the wife, who didn't do anything to deserve the cheating. A good tale even if it was in the wrong category.

Cheers,

Wulf

My cock is worn out just thinking about being hard that many times. I guess I am too old to perfoem like that.

Good story.

I am exhausted

You are a gifted writer!

What you imagine becomes a clearly worded image to the reader. Wonderful stuff. Keep it up. lol

Is there another chapter where the wife divorces this cheating asshole and takes him to the cleaners?

Good writing but just another story glorifying cheating. Would have been better if the guy was a widower. Then ignoring the consequences of his actions would not have been necessary.

but it was about CHEATING, he did it with 4 other women, even though one was hands off.

I agree with other commenter; if he'd been single then it would've been taboo.

Thanks'

DKP

He wasn't cheating on his wife. She knew what was going on the whole time. It just made her all the more horny and responsive. Excellently written!

Hot story but I kept waiting for the incest which never came. Wrong category, dude.

wondering if this has been reposted by the original author

Where was the incest? Or did I miss something?

Loved this story! Hope there is a sequel.

Loved the story, especially the Beth, Jan & Amy scenario, could you expand that section of the piece.

That was so erotic, I really wanted more of Beth, she should have her own story about how she made her cousins so submissive.

For those missing the incest angle - Beth, Amy (Tina), and Jan are cousins.