All Comments on 'First Date Ch. 01'

You write so well, so sexy and so loving. I can't wait to read more from you.

It wasx a good story, but kinda redundant. But kind redundant. On the you're my wife, you're my husband. Other than that it was great. I coluldn't do any better. Heck I couldn't do even a 10th as good.

this is the best story I have ever read! the love, the romance, the instinctive need to breed...

thank you

Total load of fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Romantic storytelling doesn't get any better than this, the first chapter of First Date. An excellent romantic plot, with engaging characters and loving drama making for a superb start to an outstanding love story.