All Comments on 'First Release Ch. 01'

please write more! the story was great. Not too drawn out, and not too short,,, excellent!

great story, if that was your first attempt, then you´re a natural.

Wonderful job with your first try. Very, very hot. It certainly left me wanting to read more and had me wishing I could really be there watching you fullfill your fantasy. So hot, and so very steamy! I absolutely loved it!

All i can say is WOW!! this story got me very hot!! well done xx

If this is your first time writing a sex story you have a great future. I was hard from the second paragraph, and blew it just when they did. Keep it up.

my cock was rock hard from the start! Could not stop wanking the whole way through!

What a hot story, I'm rock hard, cock throbbing just wanting to be there with them both and joining in having my cock sucked! Keep writting please !!!

Loved it- gave it 5 stars ! Keep it up- literally !

great story ending with a shattering release myself cheers

Ohhh, mmm, sooo goood.

I wish this would happen to me...but maybe with two men :)

you can't imagine how bad I want to have a hard cock sliding in and out of my hot ass!

Dildos have been my only recourse. My ass is aching for a hot fuck!

This is a fantasy of mine. I want hard cock in me & then to flip & fuck hot ass kissing all the time. Just enjoying the amazing feelings of first time man on man sex. I luv this story.

That was really hot dude !