All Comments on 'First Time Posing Pt. 01'

Cannot wait for Ch. 02!

Enjoyed the voyeuristic aspect of peering over the son's shoulder as he took pictures of his mom. Got a little tired of reading 'flower of life' as there are any number of words that can be used instead. Looking forward to part 2.

I love the fact that you are celebrating a woman's beauty at any age! Something society could learn to appreciate mature women and their beauty! thanks

chapter 2, I am on the edge of my seat waiting

Nice slow build. The next stage is another photo shoot, this time, when she's kneeling with her pussy open, dad starts by putting his fingers inside her, bringing her to a couple of orgasms, then slides his dick into her. Jamie takes pics of his parents screwing, complete with cream pie shots. The session after that, dad fucks mom, Jamie gets sloppy seconds while dad takes pics.

Hi All

Thanks for the comments

I am working on part two should have it done today will proof read it a few times and probably have it in for publishing by Wednesday

Glad you enjoyed the story

Tony

It would be a good idea to have someone go over the next episode. There are also some awkward phrases in here that could be smoothed out.

I loved the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully there will be more photos taken at home where she can take care of her men privately.

Wot no stirrups...LOL (from Ray.) Right up my alley Tony - this is good stuff.

It is such a blast.

Great idea for a storyline, waiting for next episode!

But too stilted. Some of this is over done, lake a rare stake burnt black over charcoal.

While there should be tension in the room, there shouldn't be tension in the story. That's all due to sentence structure that makes this a difficult read.

I absolutely love this story line!!!

I agree the story is rather stilted. Several misspellings. But I have a hard time believing this story. Yes, even fantasy needs to be believable.