by Alan D
Get that keyboard moving. I can't wait for the next chapter. You built that story up very well.
I can't wait for the next release.
Jeff has great patience and presence to go slow.
The only thing that did not quite ring true was the mother's first orgasmic experience merely from her boobs. If indeed she had never had this before even from her own hand, it would seem unlikely that she would come that easily. My current girlfriend does come that quickly now, but had a violent and welll endowed (a bad combination!) husband and athough it was apparently not great, she did come on occassion. While everyone is different, it still seems unlikely.
Touching and so well told. Left me hanging though! Another chapter coming (no pun intended)?
First Hobson's Choice, now Fisher's Catch...
Fur sure you will stay on top of my favorites!
Don't let us wait to long for Ch.02.
Great story, nice build up. Very sensual. Don't let us wait too long for the next chapter.
This is such a great read. Very endearing characters, a simple story line that allows them and their relationships to develop, then an hypothesis to give it plot. All rolled into the growth of a?? happy, healthy, wholesome family???
Thank you for sharing such an excellent erotic tale. I've enjoyed every moment of it.
Best story. Very well developed. Hats off to a master. The emotions captured in this story are orgasmic. You deserve top award for a story well done!.