All Comments on 'Fishing with Danni'

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HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 3 years ago

Nice romance/first time. I just wish I knew a girl like Danni!

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 3 years ago

You perfectly captured the dream of every old guy. Great characters and beautifully written. 5* all the way.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

Old guys need to be ready!

5

dikupinyadikupinyaover 3 years ago
sweet

next chapter please

AhazuraAhazuraover 3 years ago

Your usual great stuff. Thank you!

Hooked1957Hooked1957over 3 years ago
Sweet

An old man's fantasy and a sweet, well-written story.

More please.

Hooked

laptopwriterlaptopwriterover 3 years ago
She would have probably killed me, but...

what a way to go! 5 stars all the way, and thanks for giving an old man another fantasy to keep him warm on cold nights.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Another Winner

Nice first time story, you NEVER disappoint me, great writing.

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 3 years ago

That's a romantic first time story.

FuddyDuddyDudeFuddyDuddyDudeover 3 years ago

You caught me again!!!

SMOKING HOT!!!!

FDD

Freddog6601Freddog6601over 3 years ago

Nice, well written story us older guys love to drool over.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Short But Great Story

A quick read but as usual packed with detail and didn't feel too short. Any plans for a sequel?

baulloyder68baulloyder68over 3 years ago
Great story

Every mans fantasy, a hot, young, horny, fishing buddy. FIVE*****

Crusader235Crusader235over 3 years ago
2nd

2nd read, still Hot as Hell! Every guys dream fishing Pardner.

OlgreyfoxOlgreyfoxabout 2 years ago

Geeze Randy, you did it again to me. Another smoking hot lusty story. No blue pills or any other kind of chemicals, just an old fart that is enjoying reading some of your great tales. 75 yr old and hard as a rock. THANKS!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Delightful fantasies. An older man's dreams, a younger man's hopes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Too bad he wouldn't have a few accidental swimmers and make her belly get big. WHOOPS, sorry Danni...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

DAMN! I’m 55 years old and a widower. You gotta stop making me cock hard. Btw, what the fuck is YEET? DMW

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hi Randi

Short and sweet masterpiece

5*

BJ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good, but not your best. Good enough for 5 stars though.

Bill S.

Nekomusume_DaisukiNekomusume_Daisuki12 months ago

Why no follow up? Fishing the next weekend... There's room for more! :)

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman12 months ago

AND? could use more of them and reactions when other people find out

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Nice short story, but I have some issues with it. She is interested in Sloan's son and looks upon Sloan as a father figure, yet she goes all out to fuck him. After this how is she going to show her face to the son? If she's nonchalant about this, she's either a totally confused kid or a nympho with an eletra complex. And Sloan, being the adult here, should never have agreed to her proposal however tempting it might have been. He could have insisted that they go swimming, she with her bra and panties on and he with his boxers on. After the swim they could have shed the wet materials and put on their clothes and went home. Still, taken as a fantasy, it was quite erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 24 hours ago

Precocious nymphette. 56 yes guy without blue pills. What were they using for bait?

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