by m_storyman_x
sexy story. well written, great dialogue. I think i'd like fishing a lot better if that happened to me!! 5 stars
I loved it! It reminds me of a lady buddy I've gone fishing with since my wife doesn't fish.
well designed and good written Scenes of coupling. And also correct length for a contest.
and a fuck buddy neighbor who's willing to fish naked. Then forget the bass and just enjoy sex with the fuck buddy. Oh, I wish...
Good luck in the contest.
You make it clear that not only boys like naked fishing partners.
*****
Needs more details about the walleye fishing and tournament so it seems realistic.
was until after I read the story.
It figures, some here have the knack to write erotica, and many of the other authors give it their best shot and just do not quite get there.
Some miss by a mile.
Oh well, it gives all a chance to express themselves.