All Comments on 'Five Dates Ch. 06'

Your hero needs a stick to beat off the women!

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Great tale, I can't wait for the next part.

Thanks.

Great story! Hope more chapters are coming soon?

Are you going to continue the “wild horse ranch” series also??

This story gets hotter with each chapter! Next time the Caribbean? Not during hurricane season please!

Cheers

SAGE

Great chapter please keep them coming.

Another great chapter to this story

Thank you for writing

Hell of a dude

still hope he ends up with the sister in law

I believe you're getting to the end of this. It's gone about as far as it should. It's been a good ride but wrap it up.

You, who are on the road

Must have a code that you can live by.

Here we have an example of an author who does a great job planning out where their story is going!! Again, a chapter that I really enjoyed, yet, there were some spots it dragged...just "too much" at a time...

The drama with Julia and Lizzie in Michael's office...really could have toned it down some, ESPECIALLY with him having been called head of HR's office just a bit earlier!! And, Julia...making up that story about 30 women in four weeks...NOT HELPFUL AT ALL, in the whole scheme of things.

The trip with Liz is a good departure...gets both of them away from the 'crowd' and will be an opportunity to get to know each other better, as Michael plans it. Looking forward to that!!

The comment about the company board of directors...hhhmmm...will they find out/hear the rumors?? How will this affect all the office play...is still to be seen!!

Five**5**Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍

Well Michael sure got a workout today. It’s nice that he did let on to Alyssa that Julia fibbed a bit about Nancy’s last request. Finding out that she was a widower also an hadn’t moved on helped him there. Also Alyssa knowing about Liz’s situation is wonderful. I don’t know what to think about Rachel and Julia. Darleen is understandable as they are close and caring. Thank you and looking forward to reading about Michael and Liz’s Caribbean adventures.

Well, Michael is certainly turning into a "sexually passive-aggressive" version of Donna. Only Donna was more honest with herself.