All Comments on 'Five Girls, a Guy, and a Hot Tub'

more please does she, do they, how long and which ones does he get to keep

dude love it i give it a 10, wont be long b4 your in the hall of fame

Great story, hope there more to come.

Good story but why the following

And that is how I discovered I was going to be staying with my sister and four of her rather hot friends (in a house in the snow for 6 nights.) Snow in July ---

Story starts then --

- Sunday July 5th, 2009 -

The author is Australian. They have 'Upside down' winters, haha

I am a southern hemisphere resident. In hindsight I should have mentioned the story being set in Australia, my bad. But it isn't our winter that is upside down, it's yours :) Snow in December? wth? j/k

This was a fantastic read and probably in my top 5. I really hope you write a follow up/continuation story involving what happens when they get back home. If you do, and I highly encourage it, I want to see how the twins and Paige work out with him.

I really hope you continue this. This is one of the best stories on the site!

one of the best I've read in a while. I was worried when you disclaimed regarding contraception (I like an air of reality) but the story was so hot, I was having to hold back after the 2nd page, just to see how it ended.

Please continue this story. You have developed some great characters and a nice story line. If would be sad if this was the end. Seems like there are a lot more opportunities for all of them.

I was surprised with a guy who never went down on a girl and 5 girls that no one ever considered making him learn. It only seems fair since his sister never did it and ended up blowing him several times. That was the only part of the story that bugged me.

Wow, if he had ate one or two of the girls this story would have been even more perfect

My balls would have been blue doing all that fucking and sucking in such a short time but more power to him . Of course at his age I had more stamina and might have been able to match him . Good story.

Loved the story. I kept hoping Justin and Paige would fuck, and you didn't disappoint. It's also hot how you arranged for him to fuck Amanda. I do agree with some other commenters, though. It's only right that Justin should have gone down on a few of the girls. It's unimaginable that none of them asked him to eat them, truthfully; one would think that at the very least, Kara and Dawn would have encouraged him to go down on them. I'm hoping for a sequel. I can't wait for Justin to nail his sexy sister again!

This is definitely a story worth continuing.

You did a great job, Hope you write more in the near future. You obviously have a gift for storytelling as shown in this story. Thanks for your time and effort.

Your story was great ... I really hope you continue this story line and the members involved ... very very hot

havnt read many better than this

Do please keep it up.

I came on the middle of the 4th page for about a minute, damn that was hot as fuck

Please make this story into a series, loved it, so hot!

probably one of the best ive read yet i came 8 times while reading hurry and make another chapter and the end where he was fucking amanda instead of dawn and asking dawn out at the same time that ending just made this story go into my favorites list...lol

great story it had it all girl on girl twins on twins brother on sister sex in public sex in the snow which is something I want to try and brother and sister sex with hot tub hijinks you should continue this one

I'm not even into incest really, but this story is easily one of the hottest I've read. Amazing! Keep it up.

the dialog was a bit wooden. Since it's a incest themed story, developing the character's personalities a bit to give the reader a feel for the relationship. The setting was good, with the included memories, to get a bit of a feel for the brother/sister, but there is almost no background with any of the other characters.

The random Andrew spite was ...random, but ok.

I'd describe your story as a fantastic spank story, but so very close to being a classic. Keep up the good work, you are obviously improving as a writer.

AWESOME!!!

Are you planning to add more? This was very much an enjoyable read.

Sequelsequelsequelsequel right now please SEQUEL!

....that is all.

I dreamed of fucking my younger sister and when I finally did it was the most fantastic event of my life. We are both married now but still make sure we fuck each other at least once a month. My brother in law is a stupid dick head and I love thinking of him every time I shoot my load in my sister's mouth or cunt.

This was an amazingly HOT story!

Definitely want more!

Yeah I have to agree with the others, there needs to be more. It was too good to stop now.

Were any of them on birth control? Because if not, he's gonna be getting quite a few surprises in about 9 months =)

Love the story but you need to finish it, how does the date go? Do Paige and Justin get to fool around more? Do there parents find out does Andrew find out? Do the girls get pregnant? Yo necesito sabe mas

That was truly hot, you were one lucky guy. what fantasy great writing

I liked the story. It has a goofy kind of relaxed pacing and quality to it. No awkward wording, and no pretense at being anything more than a pleasant diversion. The women are all young, nubile and oh so willing. Every woman swallows and takes a cream pie (if given) without hesitation, and there are even twins! In short, this is male fantasy porn... and there is nothing wrong with that.

Kinda open ended don't cha think? Are you a sapranoes fan or what?

There really needs to be a part two. This story was incredibly hot. I was playing with myself the whole time.

Great story ... leads us to a whole lot ,more (I hope)

sublime sexy naughty hot and completely a fun fucking story!

licks and kisses allover you for writing us to so many orgasms...

henrynjociexoxx

would love to see a follow up

This needs a sequel

Great story. Its the long stories like these that I love.

this story is great. as a long time book reader, ive had my fair share of good books and your's is # 3 on my list. i hope you make a sequel cuz i dont want to be left wondering what happened when they got back home. plz make a sequel!!!!

great story want it to continue

Wow! Great story. Dying for a sequel...

Great story!! BUT!!!!! How does a healthy guy in a mountain cabin with 5 hot , busty, sexy girls for a entire week not end up going down on any one of them?

Right now. Or yesterday. Whichever is convenient. That is all.

Best story I've read in years. Please write a sequel.

You were surrounded by wet pussy but you never licked it? But u expected all the girls to suck your cock? I really hope this is not a true indication of your mindset because that would make u an arsehole !! And reinforces male sterotypical behaviour.

He should have ate some pussy though.

Some great stuff.. The Amanda Dawn part was hilarious XD

This was a great story!!!! The problem is, it needs a second part, probably, the two on a date, and something like that.. That would be AWESOME!

An easy way to tell twins apart is by hair color, height, or whose boobs were bigger.

Five girls and not a pussy eaten, What are you mental !! A women's pussy is pure ambrosia both before and after cumming, one of the most hottest and delicious experiences a guy can have ;^)

Incredible story, but he should have returned the favour and ate their pussies ;)

group sex just proves he didn't care about any of them and they didn't care about him. incest has to be kept to a minimum and no outsiders it is to easy for one of them to get mad and tell on the rest. thiss would have been better in the group area instead of here, just wasn't enough good incest to be here.

Great descriptive story that was fun to read! Teen exploration with friends and some wincest to boot! I'd love splinter cell stories off of this one! Bookmarked to read again later :)

Fun story! Real too. Lucky guy!

It got pretty boring after the 300th load shooting off. Gimme a break.

You had nearly every sort of sexual coupling imaginable (minus anal sex), and Justin NEVER gave any of those women cunnilingus? He was even asked, near the beginning of the story, and he confessed to having NO experience, and he wasn't even curious once? Even with all the girls eating each other out around him? I kept waiting for him to have that experience...and I felt a little cheated when the story ended without him pleasuring ANY of the women that way, especially Paige or Dawn.

For a story that seemed to be fixated on blowjob after blowjob, for Justin to never give any oral sex, but just be on the receiving end, made him seem selfish,

It was a hot story. The sex was generally good, if a little repetitive. The tension and conflict were pretty good. And I enjoyed the character development and dialog. I wish there had been more dialog and a bit less sex.

would love to read what happens next with the 6 of them

I just keep coming back to this one. Wished there were more like this one.

this is an addictive story I read it at least 3 times let us know about the date with Dawn

i want to see how it works out between the guy, his sis, and her friends

This story is one of my all time favorites.

I really want to see how it develops so please write a follow up

sequel please. Too many unanswered question. Does he end up with Dawn or his sister or both ? Do any of them get pregnant? Do they ALL get back together on a regular basis. So many way you can go with this . Love it . I just can't wait to see which way you go with this story

Written by someone who has clearly watched a huge amount of porn. Countless blowjobs and facials, one guy with a never-ending erection and a bevy of super-hot sluts all up for anything. It was fun but hardly brilliant. Four stars.

It's a fucking freaking story of incest. I loved it, but if you leave a story in a situation like this, then it becomes your responsibility to write another one. The one in which Justin's relationship with Paige and Dawn can be satisfied. Think about this..

Can you write a sequel to this please. This is a really good story and I loved it and so did many people

Cont please

good story, waiting for part 2. He should enjoy his sister's ass.

please go on with this story, it is awsome

Dawn is my favorite too. Hehe. Hoped for a sexy car ride ending, but i love it 100% either way

Dude you have some great writing skills, drawing the reader into the story and making it realistic enough to seem believable. Awesome story! Keep it up, incest isn't usually even my thing but 5 stars from me this is by far one of my favorites! Please continue

After reading This if you don't have a huge booner or r wet ur not a real human

<3 the story best one I've ever red

Definitely was great reading. Haven't gotten that hard reading a story like I got with this. Please get part 2 out asap!

I came every time the dude did

hope the author comes back and maybe adds to this. great story.

9am Sunday (-morning) (WHY NOT 9AM SUNDAY NIGHT????) (REDUNDANT!!!!)

BETWEEN THE TWINS so I eased myself in BETWEEN THEM

Dawns (Dawn’s)

bi-sexual (bisexual)

part way (partway)

allows them too (to)

discrete (discreet)

close up (close-up)

any more (anymore)

chicks (chick’s)

quiped (quipped)

friends (friend’s)

follow up (follow-up)

Dawn and myself (I)

non sexual (nonsexual)

my RIGHT HAND and grabbed her right breast in my HAND

we repeating the process (repeat)

girl was on their knees (her)

peaked over (peeked)

ass hole (asshole)

HER FACE with such force it coated most of HER FACE

(-didn't) wanted to get some more skiing

Paige and I (me)

made there way (their)

My orgasm quickly re-approached (returned)

entry way (entryway)

minxes (minx’s)

Comment for the editing..

Satisfied? Yes, agreed, but needs to be titled A Greed Satisfied.

- 'Ed Hurting.

I've favorited and reread now numerous times. Great stuff. Please write more brother sister stand alone stories. Also, some others like sweet reluctance.

That pretty much sums it up

Incredibly hot!!!

Thanks for taking the time to create all five pages. Yet for only five pages, you put together a multiplex story line that excels in both arousal and humor. Hope there's a future to be read about from all these folks.

This was a simply wonderful story. It definitely needs some sort of follow up though, because we NEED to know what happens with the date between Justin and Dawn, and IF anything more occurs between Justin and all of the girls after they return home. I know that this is a work of fiction, but you have to bow to the Laws of Reality. Many others already pointed out that it is unrealistic that there would be snow in July, and that is VERY true; I live near Lake Placid, NY and there was no snow left by May this year. Also, during the "Truth or Dare" Justin admitted to not having eaten pussy before, and not a single one of the girls offered theirs to him for anything other than fucking. I liked that by the end Justin had fucked each of the girls, including his own sister. It seems that Dawn and Paige (the sister) were the only ones to get any real mileage outta Justin's cock, as they are the only ones that he fucked more than once. But again, you have to bow to the Laws of Reality and acknowledge that not using any form of contraception can, and in most cases, lead to pregnancy; you have a responsibility to your readers to inform them of the consequences of such behavior, especially if they were to engage in incestual sexual intercourse like what is depicted in your story, and there is also the high risk of STD's.

Great story! I've seen some comments regarding snow in July. For those that don't know, Mt. Buller is in Australia, where it is winter in July. The author possibly should have pointed that out, but wonderful story!

In real life takes me back to a youth camp that go out of hand. Resulted in 5 pregnancies the youngest mother being 15 and the youngest father being 14. Not sure if it was established who all the fathers were.

DEFINITELY NEEDS TO BE A SEQUEL

Great Story! Definitely needs a sequel! Love the writing and story line.

This needs a sequel so bad

continue please??

Awesome, they should make a porn movie on this.

Part 2 please!

We need a sequel, please! One of the best stories ever!

such an amzing story(my favorite). but we need a part 2, please and thank you

reasons a man should almost never ejaculate in a hot tub or a pool, is due to the danger of plugging the screens of the filter and possibly causing the pump to run dry and overheat and possibly ruining the pump.

Need 2 weeks vacation next time. This was such 🔥 hot story. Please continue with more chapters. I rated this story with 10 🔥 horny hard boner's.

Incredible Job!!!

Is there a part 11

To the anonymous plumber in the comments below: I'm sorry, but if I ever found myself in a situation like this, the hot tub pump and filters would just have to take their chances.

Hot story!