All Comments on 'Five Years and Four Days Ch. 01'

I'm all giddy for the next installment. I just love a good love story and this is already on its way there. Thank you careythomas.

For the next installation 😘

Love this story! Keep it up

Ahhhhhhh more!!!

absolutely love the story. more please. and soon

Very yummy indeed! The beauty is in the details! Thank you!

love it so far, looking forward to more.

I'm enjoying this a lot

Really starting to love this ch 2 plz!!!!

More like a romance than a lesbian story.

Seriously hooked, can't wait for the next chapter

I read much of but not all of the prologue. What I discovered reading this is how marvelous it is that there is a fully formed backstory. The raised eyebrows and winks are so much more meaningful when the reader understands a little. This is going to be one of my favorites, for sure.

Well done, you are a very good story teller. Yes we all know where this is leading, but the way you have constructed the story and the detail in character development makes it even more erotic. Five stars and please continue quickly.

Excellent

well, I can say that this is starting to read less like the harry potter stories, I am starting to really like this series and hope to read many more, also I guess Jess finally got the hint about how Alex feels about her

Love it. I love how you portray the personal prospective of both of them. The details of their thoughts are very realistic and I love how it builds. You had me smiling to myself a few times while reading! Keep up the good work.

And I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

Hey Carey,

I enjoy how well you've captured the ageless dance of testing romantic interest in these two characters. Many thanks for being so thorough in your descriptions and development.

Looking forward to reading more of your fine work.

You have got a great start on a story. Character development and as mentioned above detail is wonderful.... now on to the rest of the series with my comments at the end. Enjoyed very much!

This is a perfect beginning! So well written and engaging. I particularly like the dialogue between, Cathy (we all have a friend like her) and Jess is hilarious and touching. 5 Starts ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I knew that Cathy was on to something, and my body was way ahead of where my head was.

I find myself relaxing into your style now I am familiar with it. I just go with the flow knowing I am in the best of hands, and looking out for what is to come.

Beautifully written and engaging. Love the writing style and the dialogue, which is amusing touching. Will be reading more

Giddy would be the feeling I felt as I read through this entire chapter! X3

This is so good! Love the writing and direction you are taking with these two. Your pacing is beautiful, taking us on a sweet, sweet (and have I mentioned giddy?) ride.

Love the anticipation and character building! ❤️

Binge time! Can't wait to read everything!

Though if there is one thing I have to say, as a photography student, seeing her just chuck the tripods on the floor was painful. They need love ;_; (not to mention they can get pretty expensive).

But thank you for this story! X3

This is pure class, and beautiful.

I’m going to read the heck out of this story lol it’s so cute!

This is good, REALLY GOOD !