All Comments on 'Flirting with Protocol Ch. 01'

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peachesmelbapeachesmelbaover 12 years ago
Don't Stop Now...

Have a great story going - good characters - nice plot - have to hear what happens next with Mike and Callie (and maybe Ryann and Matt too). Thanks for a story about EMS! Realistic and believable.

SLOgentSLOgentover 12 years ago
Great start

I echo a previous comment: Great opening for more adventures. Very believable characters. Keep it going.

liquid_yellowliquid_yellowover 12 years ago
Very nice

This has real potential for continuation!

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