by PenguinEmperor
Many congratulations on a story that is extremely well written and very cleverly told. There's plenty of potential for future development, but even if this is all there is, it's a real triumph. I liked it a lot.
I really enjoyed this, good job.
I have to wonder because of all the setup, are you planning on continuing the story?
This probably was the most well written story I've ever read on here. Can't wait to see what's next from you!
First I totally agree with the other comments thus far . This was a very enjoyable story by virtue of being so well conceived and crafted . I sure hope that the two lovers continue the relationship . Possibly the lovely elf will be in the group that attends the festival in Tovor's village ? A story this compelling deserves a follow up chapter .
Great storytelling and incredibly hot to read, like the rest of your stories. Please don’t tell us it will be another 16 months before your next one...but if it is then so be it!
You really made the MC a little bitch in this story. He was shamed about taking the dick up his ass for the coin, what you should've and could've had him do was give her the coin back and say something like, "Hold onto this for me, we'll be seeing each other again." or something like that.
It was heartwarming and nice, something I didn’t expect, really. I enjoyed it.
Well, I definitely will say, I liked this story. :) Very realistic, in terms of bottoming for the first time - hell, I still feel this way.
But I would definitely like to see a sequel! As others have mentioned, maybe have Tovor be the top this time, just for a change of pace. But hey, nothing wrong with him getting used to bottoming either.
A very nice story, well written. She was blue, but otherwise quite nice!
I really hope you write a sequel! I would love to read more about their developing relationship ♥️
I don't think i ever read a futa on male story so well written on the hesitation and discovery of the male part - which is something we really need more of. And please make a sequel, i really want to see how Tovor will react when he finds Kasaina again and has to deal with the fact that she fucked his ass xD. (Pls dun' mak Tovor b the top)
This is great just don't make him the top in the next chapter.