All Comments on 'Flowers in the Forest'

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JackMacklinJackMacklinover 5 years ago
Clever and beautifully written story

Many congratulations on a story that is extremely well written and very cleverly told. There's plenty of potential for future development, but even if this is all there is, it's a real triumph. I liked it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

I really enjoyed this, good job.

I have to wonder because of all the setup, are you planning on continuing the story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Incredible

This probably was the most well written story I've ever read on here. Can't wait to see what's next from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well written - Many thanks

First I totally agree with the other comments thus far . This was a very enjoyable story by virtue of being so well conceived and crafted . I sure hope that the two lovers continue the relationship . Possibly the lovely elf will be in the group that attends the festival in Tovor's village ? A story this compelling deserves a follow up chapter .

IrvingParkeIrvingParkeover 5 years ago

I would love to see more of these two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The best

Great storytelling and incredibly hot to read, like the rest of your stories. Please don’t tell us it will be another 16 months before your next one...but if it is then so be it!

LegitwoodLegitwoodover 5 years ago

I hope you make a sequel to this fic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Do a sequel where Tovor tops pls

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
please write a sequel!!!

it was wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You Made The MC a little bitch

You really made the MC a little bitch in this story. He was shamed about taking the dick up his ass for the coin, what you should've and could've had him do was give her the coin back and say something like, "Hold onto this for me, we'll be seeing each other again." or something like that.

MarieJoanneMarieJoanneover 5 years ago
Gorgeous

Delicious story xxx Marie

IJustWriteFanfictionIJustWriteFanfictionover 5 years ago

It was heartwarming and nice, something I didn’t expect, really. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Pretty nice story! Wouldn't mind a sequel. :)

Well, I definitely will say, I liked this story. :) Very realistic, in terms of bottoming for the first time - hell, I still feel this way.

But I would definitely like to see a sequel! As others have mentioned, maybe have Tovor be the top this time, just for a change of pace. But hey, nothing wrong with him getting used to bottoming either.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A nice surprise

A very nice story, well written. She was blue, but otherwise quite nice!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing!

I really hope you write a sequel! I would love to read more about their developing relationship ♥️

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please, make a sequel

I don't think i ever read a futa on male story so well written on the hesitation and discovery of the male part - which is something we really need more of. And please make a sequel, i really want to see how Tovor will react when he finds Kasaina again and has to deal with the fact that she fucked his ass xD. (Pls dun' mak Tovor b the top)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please please make another chapter

This is great just don't make him the top in the next chapter.

fd8984596fd8984596almost 4 years ago

Another very well written story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautifully written

Just as the title says.

macymadisonmacymadisonover 3 years ago

This was wonderful.

billyvanbruntbillyvanbruntabout 1 year ago

Well written, more to come I hope.

Twisted4everTwisted4ever8 months ago

Hot story. Hope you do a sequel!

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