All Comments on 'FOC - Uleni's Gamble 03'

Story gets better and better. Thanks for posting this kickass story

Beware the Greeks even when they bring gifts, or Ares is a Greek god.

If that is Ross' position, I would think Uleni's King Luis is in for some serious edu-ma-cation after Reise is put down.

Great tale! Enjoyed it immensely.

Loving it.

Since the air rifles worked, I'm assuming that Justin knew about rifling the barrels, as without that to give the billets spin they would have tumbled, losing speed and accuracy.

Justin's strategy could have been a lot better when Riese was retreating, although I suppose it might have made the story less interesting. For example, the mages, or some of them, could have gone ahead and set traps, or simply harrassed the retreating troops with lightning which could well have killed multiple soldiers per strike if they were in close formation. Another hillock style trap could well have taken out the remaining troops, with the mages picking any survivors off with projectiles from a distance with impunity.

It says Chapter 13 - Epilogue. What Epilogue? It just stops. And I guess after 8 years that's it. Disappointing, as it's not really over. For that alone, 2 stars.