All Comments on 'Fondest Dreams Ch. 04'

Ive read all of your storys with these characters and i must say you make my day when i see new posts by you :)

Hey browneye what your talking about sounds similar to jaz cullens multi series writing only its vampires so probably not the same

The story you are talking about is The Order- 14 chapters series and the author is purefire.

I believe the story that you are talking about is about the Brotherhood but I can't remember who the author is. There were stories of three of the brothers written.

They make such a beautiful couple.

Love it more please!!!!!!!

This was a tough chapter to edit in the original version. However, you succeeded in making it better and spiced up the sex. I still do not like "nether lips", but WTF, at lest Willi finally got his cock in her pussy. All in all a great chapter. XP

I am enjoying this tale. Thanks to all three of you for a good read.