All Comments on 'Football Widow Ch. 02'

beautiful striking story of two women

such a pleasure to read a hot story that has believable and complex characters as well, much less one with two women. and you took the "butch lesbian seduces naive housewife" meme and made it feel fresh, which is awesome.

The story is a real page turner, as it were, with great character development and lots of caring on the parts of Christa and Sue. However, I have one issue that keeps nagging at me. All through this story are mentioned Bernie and Sue's children, saving for their college, etc., etc. However, WHERE ARE THESE CHILDREN while all these hi-jinks are going on between Christa and Sue? I take them to be adolescent children, so in a real-life situation, the women would have to deal with the kids' running around, especially during football season, when they would be in school and coming home in the afternoons, thus putting the kibosh on any sexual encounter, especially the all-day kind.

not bad for part 2, Christa is taking a big chance with her bosses wife, but lets see where this is going

Beautiful

old woman molest sue will be perfect

I love the dilemma that Sue is facing and how you're writing it. Brilliant so far.