All Comments on 'Football Widow Ch. 05'

I'll miss the tortured waiting for the next installments. Beautifully done, Colly.

*HUGS*

You spin the most enjoyable and amazing tales. Loved every installment.

A wonderful wrap up to a very addicting story. This chapter was well worth the wait and it's great to see Christa and Sue on their way to a happily ever after. Thanks for sharing their journey and landing them in such a hopeful place. Your writing, as always, teases, torments, intrigues and satisfies. Fantastic ending.

~lucky

How I love a happy ending.

Really nice story Colleen. Well Don

Thank you for the absolutly perfect birthday present! I've been dying for a happy ending for Sue and Christa ever since it started and it finally happened on my birthday! Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! It was wonderful and I know I'll read it many many many more times in the future. You're a fabulous author Colly.

As always, a display of consumate skill. Sexy, loving, tender, and the perfect ending.

I never tire of reading your work. Always leaves me wanting more.

Thank you for sharing your creation with us.

Matriarch

simply the best lesbian character material going anywhere in my opinion.

Colleen, this was the greatest ending to your story. I was afraid that you were going to end this story with Ch. 04, and am pleasantly suprised that you didn't. I have enjoyed every story that you publish on this site and am constantly checking for your updates. I can't thank you enough for the inspiration that you have given me. You are one of, if not the best, writers on this site. Again, thank you for your stories. They are truly remarkable and help restore my faith in finding true love.

Thank you hun

It was well worth the wait. I enjoyed it very much. I was so happy when those two got back together. I love your writing and hope to see more in the future. you friend Kania

Colly,

A beautiful end to such a tale. Couldn't have been more pleased to see the two together as they should be, and also to have everyone accept them, even if begrudginly. AWESOME...can't wait to read your next story:)

PC

Why is it I keep coming back to this story. There is a splendid plot, lovely characters beautifully drawn, and you have a command of language which is a joy to read.

Your stories are amazing. All i can trully say is that you are a trully gifted writer, and i can't wait to read about your caracters next adventures.

Colly - thanx for the ending - purrrfect in every way. I have really enjoyed the story - thanx

i would like the story to gone on a little more about bernie. did he find out that christa was fucking his wife, if so did he fire her , did he make want to quit. does she go on to become a famous artist. your story is good but leaves a lot of ouestions like where are the kids how did, she inform them mommie is leaveing daddy for a woman.you need to write another chapter to answer these ouestions.

Ms. Thomas,

Absolutely a fantastic story from start to finish. As all good stories and writers do, one can close ones eyes and mentally picture the events that one has read unfold. The minds movie camera reenacts what one has read. This is mark of a well written story and an accomplished writer.

Please continue with these master pieces, particularly ones in this particualr category (lesbian).

I enjoyed this series so much and am impressed by your work in general. Very few authors can capture my interest here, but you do. Great work,

Read all 5 dhapters and this has to be the best lesbian story I ever read. Please....write more likethis.

Colleen: Without a doubt one of the best Lesbian stories I've ever read. You did a fantastic job with all five chapters. Thank you and please continue you have a gift so please use it.

I've read so many of the stories...still haven't finished them all. But I have to say this one is one of my favorites. It's so hard to pick...I do like them all!!!

You wrote with such passion, such love I found myself once again stepping into the story and feeling what they were feeling and going through.

It's very bitter sweet to keep reading more stories...knowing that at some point there will be an end to reading all of Your stories. With nothing to continue.

O Colleen, wherever your spirit is now wandering your earthly self has left a legacy of stories so good that I wish Literotica would make an anthology of them. This one had me imagining it as a film, with Vince Vaughan as Bernie and Julia Roberts as Sue,with Elen DeGeneres as Christa. Well, what imaginings! That legacy of writing talent deserves to be seen by as many people as possible on this planet - may your spirit pave the way for your retrospective fame.

I miss you Colly! I hope your spirit is soaring. I do not doubt for a moment it is.

See title bitch.

Fantastic, very romantic, and very very HOT! I love Colleen's stories always, & this is one of the best. You are my favorite author, thank you.

This is so idyllic, a story that can happen when two people get real with each other. Trifle contrived towards the end, but really, it didn't matter and didn't take away from the big picture of these women's all-consuming love for each other. Very well told and very entertaining. God bless you, Colleen, wherever in heaven you are.

For the person who said that negative expletive directed at Colleen, I have one thing to say--look inside yourself for the answers to your frustration.

Peace....

It truely was. Except Wilma got on my nerves at the store. You were such a fantastic writer. Rest in peace. <3

THIS AUTHOR IS IN A CLASS OF HER OWN. THE BEST I HAVE READ AND I HAVE READ HUNDREDS AND HUNDREDS ON HERE.

I did not know Colleen had passed on, is it true? What a loss of talent. May your path be smooth Colleen...

I have sat and read all five chapters this evening, what a brilliant story. Erotic and sad in equal measure, it actually made me cry!

Awesome, briliant story...

This is a beautiful story. Loving and understanding towards all it's characters, even Bernie! Very hot too, of course!

I love this series and thats because I love how its not all about fucking, obviously there is lots involved but what really makes it so good is the feel-good vibe as well as the romantic-ness of it which make it so much better than the best sex story.

Keep writing like this, because you have a rare talent which deserves to be treasured and shared with the world.

Great story if it is one, love the way it flows and more life like than most of them agin great story.

Nice to find a decent story, instead of just sex and filler

Colleen, yet again you have crafted a story rich in detail, character, and a great story line. While the stories include some great sex scenes it is the other attributes that keep me coming back to your stories time and again. I can get the sex from so many other authors as well but so many of them should to come to you to learn how to write truly great stories. I cannot wait to read the next story from such a marvelous and fertile imagination....

I'm sad to see this series end, but evrything ends eventually and ou wrote this series beautifully. You devoted a lot of thought to your characters, your sex scenes were imaginative to say the least and the way you would have a little lead-on bottom of each page is a truly brilliant technique that I have yet to see anywahere else on this site. If you ever go to print I'll be in line for the boxed set!

so much for marital vows...boo hoo my hubby watches football...:)

talented writing and spinning of the web... Bravo!

Rcommended to all readers,well crafted and laid out,not too wordy & very descriptive of erotic play within bounderies,well done Colleen

I lost my dad recently and reading this story (again!) made me cry like a baby. The emotion is very real, and is a true reflection of how real love should be.

We all know that it is not like this after 15 years together ...........but hey we can but dream.

Well done Colleen you have really captured all the emotions in this story

Beautifully written very lovely story you have a great talent. Thank You For Sharing Your Work.

Certainly one of the finest, if not the finest lesbian theme I've ever read. The thought and talent that went into this delicious sapphic classic is indicative of the author's devotion to girl-girl pleasure and it's culmination in lesbian marriage and child-bearing.

Many thanks for the pleasure I received on reading it. I can only hope there is a sweet biracial lesbian couple out there who could emulate the elements of this storyline.

I couldnt stop reading. Excellent !

Thank you for writing such a wonderfully sexy story. You, Ms. Thomas, are quite possibly the best writer in Literotica. No offense to any of the other writers.

it was alright,

It's amazing how after all these years and hundreds of thousands of views no one's noticed that Sue went from 33 to 37 in the span of four weeks.

I noticed the age discrepancy too as I'm sure many others did. I imagine that after all those words and chapters it grew difficult for Colleen to keep all the details straight, though by all other measures an excellent novella.

Such a wonderful feel good erotic story. When I finished it I couldn’t help but smile.

I felt so happy for the couple.

Amazing story , it is the first of your work I have read but it definately wont be the last now I will all of them. Thank you for sharing your talent

A wonderful story. Great writing. I couldn't put it down until I read all parts

Great story and sad that it has ended however, you really gave it a surprise ending with Bernie and Christa together and getting along. Very well written story as you developed each plot very well. Gave the story a 5 as it truly deserves it. Keep writing these hot n steamy stories. Loved it.

Sadly read elsewhere that Colleen died, hence no new stories for so long. Have just discovered her and love her stories, this is one of the best, such great sex scenes and lots of them but also interesting extra characters, Trina and She's mum making for a good story as well. Wherever you are Colleen thanks for sharing your amazing gift with so many of us.

Sad to hear about Colleen's passing. She was a gifted writer. This series has some of the best and most vivid descriptions of soft BDSM sex I have ever seen/heard/read: powerful without being demeaning or intentionally brutal. This series was special for many reasons, especially the variety of characters interacting within the plot. Definitely worth more than one read.

Thank you Colleen, for giving us this eternal tribute that has outlived you. Rest in peace.