All Comments on 'For the Love of God Ch. 01'

I'd like to read the continuation, great beginning.

I wish you'd finish this story; great start!

I also wish I would finish it. I made the classic rookie move and posted a chapter without finishing the story. Also, I hate the title, but oh well. I'm working on it again. Should be fun.

I really enjoyed this story. If you ever decide to continue Bill and Amy's story I would love to read it. I think they've got a great perspective. Very, very cool!

very uncool to title a story chapter 1, not finish the story, and post other things

The story l written and interesting and I would love to have found out more about Jim & Helena. The interaction with Bill & Amy was also interesting but that was what killed the story. While the idea that belief in an all powerful old man in the sky with a white beard should be incompatible with sexual expression seems ridiculous on all sorts of levels - the idea of 'Christian Porn' is equally ridiculous and requires too much suspension of belief. The thing that really killed the story, though, was Bill stating that Homosexuality, Adultery and Profanity were still wrong to his 'open & liberal' mind.

Firstly, great story 5*. I like most of the rest, WISH YOU WOULD FINISH IT.

As to the comment, reader_3634, I checked your listing, you have no stories, you haven't been back to your listing in over a year and a half.

Please give us something to base our opinions of your skills on.

So sad you've never returned to finish this great story as it showed great promise. That being said this was a very well thought out and written 'chapter'. I've read most of your work posted on Literotica and definitely look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.