All Comments on 'Forbidden fruit is the sweetest'

Three instances of dialog between the characters. Borrrrrrring.

This reads like an Avis ad.

Kindly fuck off, you insulting and disrespectful prat. Not every story is filled with dialogue or complex conversations.

To the author: The story itself was very good, fairly realistic and quite erotic. It felt like you rushed it on the sex scenes a little bit, but it was still good. If you'd had just a little more fire in your belly, I think you could've turned this into a fairly intricate tale and made it last longer, but as it stands, it serves as a decent stroke piece.

Lucky step-dad, though I wish they had stayed together after he blew his nut into her. Especially the second time, there was no hurry to rush off.

Why don't you fuck off, you pompous piece of shit? Fuckheads like you can't stand differing opinions.

The inability to deal with criticism is a sign of immaturity.

I don't know what it is but reading story's like this always gets me so wet ;-)

at a new years eve party back in 1967. she was in

the bathroom, and I had to take a piss, so I just walked

in as she was sitting on the toilet. one thing led to

another, then after she wiped her pussy, I picked

her up, spread her legs and fucked her tight little

pussy. six months went by as I saw her again with

her belly swollen up, most likely with my kid as

she wasn't married.

Makes me wish I had a daughter.