All Comments on 'Forbidden Lust'

A very erotic story that needs some continuations. In this fantasy world there is no need for a mention of the Pill and it would be even more erotic if you had knocked up Rachel, accidently, with results coming forth of diapers, midnight feedings, etc., etc.

If Only. ~ The only thing he would need to worry about is keeping up with that young of a girl. Great story....Rich

You are the man and on here you always will be.! Another great story and as we all know - there will be many to follow. Thanks. JAG/TSO

not even remotely entertaining...very boring

If you hate the stories so. Go read anything but this. You really have the nerve!! I have seen lots of your posting all over this authors site but you keep reading. There is really something wrong when after reading the story, you have nothing to say but how much it disgusts you. Go back to your family stories.

Part 2 please.....continue writing.

Add a chapter 2, where Rachel visits Jack later. As Jack has his cock buried in Rachel's pussy, have Chris, uncharacteristically, wake up and look for Rachel. When she searches for her, she finds Jack's door ajar and hears Rachel moaning. Chris looks in and is confused, but fascinated. She starts playing with her tits and pussy. Eventually, Rachel sees her and invites her to join. After joining, Jack and Rachel pleasure Chris. When Chris has cum a couple of times, Chris gets on top of Jack, and Rachel aligns Jack's cock with Chris's pussy. The conclusion would be continue sex for several years.

Oh please. Finish this. I'm almost there.