All Comments on 'Forced onto a Stranger's Lap'

I must agree to anonymous here, woman indeed don't often think the way you described this protagonist. I would suggest you do some research on females, perhaps let one pre read your stories or change the perspective?

But otherwise I liked the story, I do think it's a bit weird she didn't even think to call out for help, perhaps you could've made her panties a gag or something like that, otherwise, I really liked it.

Just want to note for people this is my first story. Was experimenting with writing this genre as compared to normal writing and I made choices and went for it. I am a woman 😂.

I'm female, and I thought the story was accurate for my fantasies. Thank you, I enjoyed this~

Hey, I think you did good for a first attempt. Non-consent is my favorite kind of story. This was hot and quick. Feel free to bang out a part 2. Next time, describe them a little more than just the clothes.

Great writing! My only suggestion is to work on your conclusion, draw it out a little and really focus in on the embarrassment she would be feeling.

Great story. Love the dark subway scenario and love the reluctance theme. I really like the stories where it's not about being forced, it's about the internal argument between "I really shouldn't and I should do/say something" and "but it feels so good, let's see where this goes".

Comments- "Author, you don't know how women think!"

Author- *Is a woman.*

Ha!

Now I want to know if the person saying research what women think is a woman. As a woman, I enjoyed it, and see no problem with the internal (mild) struggle as given. Everyone is different. "Research women" suggests a complete lack of human character understanding - regardless of gender. Keep writing!!

to say otherwise is quite narrow minded and myopic. To those that say such, I think they need to research women other than themselves. Everyone responds to things differently.

I too, am a woman and have felt these exact feelings. So you just keep writing author. Remember, haters gonna hate. Especially those that cannot see past their own nose/mind.

This woman has a special gift for story telling.

I can’t wait to here more

Thankyou for your story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

what tf is this shit

I loved it don’t worry about what others say this was amazing keep up the good work ;)

Thought this was hot and would love more!

This is the perfect non con story in my opinion. The internal struggle is real. It the "I'm a good girl and good girls shouldn't enjoy this." "But I am." "I should run, but i don't." Plus I love there train or bus stories. The "victim" is captive, no where to run, no one helps her. Plus the shame of her body betraying her by be so aroused.

All this submission, shame, humiliation, arousal with zero stupid violence. Keep writing.

Women do think like this.

Awesome first story. Very hot!

not a lot

if i thought about it long enough i might say ok i think

I loved it..this is the kind of story i was looking for , Its not rape or violent she could’ve saved herself by screaming but she didn’t want too , its just that feeling of being wanted and trapped and ur thoughts say don’t do it but u really really want to do it and boom you do it ..its that feeling of being wanted so bad and for once not being treated too gentle..he obviously satisfied her needs too so he wasn’t being greedy ..I just loved it

Hot story, Thanks and give us more! The fuck scene as you described wouldn't work with me . I'm a SCREAMER when it comes to orgasms.

Me likey

I like the feeling of being trapped even though inside, it only excites me to be fucked in such a situation.

Read this again. So good, BUT TOO SHORT! ;)

need a pt 2!

Naughty girl, she virtually gave herself to him. He should take her with him, spank her naughty bottom and enjoy her again in bed.

I don't think she would object. Could be the start of a good relationship!

Mmmmmmm

I've come back to this story several times. Short and sweet and ever so sexy. I love that grey area in dubcon, where she's turned on and loves it but was forced or coerced into the situation. Excellent story.

A great "slam bam thank you Mam". Keep writing, you do a great job.

Love a good Reluctance story

Tess (uk)

Good story, lovely fantasy, short and sweet.

Why does the PA work in a power failure?

Sooooooooo good

Holy crap, phenomenal 😍

So hot

this is so hot! I love it!

This is So hot

This has been a long fantasy of mine and I only wish my city had a subway....

Excellent story. I love these "trapped in close quarters" stories, and I love stories where the woman's climax is very reluctant.

Good one. I have had to weed through so many terribly ugly non-con stories to find gems like this one. Reluctance overcome by dirty whispers, domination and seductive touch.

Would love to see them run into each other around town a few times, where he doms and seduces her in public spaces until he realizes he needs her for real and goes after a relationship with her.

Fuck my pussy so wet

5 stars, loved it, your details from a woman's point of view are quite refreshing, it's not just a wham-bam thank you mam fuck, her sexual feelings (after the initial shock) need to be accounted for.

I am 24 year old Hindu housewife in Kanpur ; I had found the city where teenagers easily got into sex relations in early stages. First I started chats, then got into smoking and drinking, and finally into light drugs, which led to real sex. there came a time when I was on pills. I would let a boy or man take me only if he wore condom. A few of them started fucking me against my will or without wearing condoms. They used dirtiest abuses, slapping, some even fucked me anally. I started loving forced and painful sex. I got involved with mature men and if one had a large size etc I used to fuck them. I then planned to hook up a Hindu boy for marriage, whom i seduced and finally married against the wishes of many relatives on either side. I then let many guys fill me up with their cum, and got pregnant, which solved my problems and even those against our marriage had to give in. Even after marriage three years before I meet my secret lovers and enjoy forced and nonconsensual sex with them.

RIYA

Loved your writing and I felt every word. During my reading I had a huge orgasm. Please write more.

Need a part 2

This story is very well written and extremely hot. It made my pussy wet. Loved it.

Yeahhh this is beautiful- please write more!