by SimoneLisbon
the storyline doesn't make sense, her boyfriend was killed even though he was a rich kid and could have been held for ransom, her father probably could have borrowed money sold everything he had he obviously adored his daughter sacrificing so much for her, why didn't they ransom her too, why did they set her apart because she was black? keeping all of the mystery going too long becomes a little bit irritating, the hitman is not giving details, she isn't, no one is and we are already at chapter 9. unless you are turning this into a very long novel or you will just lose interest and not bother to finish the story it would be a shame. you managed to keep us on tiptoes until now please do not give up on the story