All Comments on 'Forced to Change Ch. 12'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

why always so short?

How posting so short improves the story?

Clarissa72 over 4 years ago

What!!

Who did she kill/// it’s so many to pick from that I’m beyond curious...like he keeps saying “something is not right”... but what now?

DarlingK almost 3 years ago

Great story telling but Katie became supremely annoying in this chapter. Her behavior seems nonsensical and inconsistent with what's been revealed of her character so far. But still, awesome story!

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