All Comments on 'Forever and Always'

Loved reading this story, it is great. Please continue to write this type of story.

Where is the story? The meet for the fist time they fuck. They meet for the second time they fuck. I mean c'mon a little intro would be nice. Its not totally bad, just more a wham bam thank you Ma'am.

It just didn't last long enough! Don't stop. Keep them coming.

your nickname says it all a nanosecond was all this story was worth way to fast and no real story start over

EVER ASPECT OF THIS STORY IS AWFUL.

Try spending more that a MINUTE, THINKING ABOUT THE STORY, AND WRITING THE STORY

Fail

From reading part of this story, I assume that your native language is not English.

The story is very hard to read with all the errors. If you don't know English, get an editor who does.