All Comments on 'Forgetful Maid Ch. 02'

I love the quote at the end. It brings a sophistication, a sense of philosophy to the lust bringing sexual desire for dominance. "'A master is burdened with responsibility, tied to a slave as much as the slave is tied.' He reminded himself. "'If it doesn't work though, what then?'"

I was disappointed with the ending. I liked the story until the end when he sends the woman away. She was developing nicely until then.

I actually loved the ending, it went along way to redeeming Roger. Now I'd love to see a sequel. Helen's marriage is doomed, her husband won't be able to provide the attention she craves. So it would be fantastic for Roger and her to continue their adventure together, because ultimately they seem perfect for each other. Helen can challenge him as an equal in their marriage and business, while still being his little slut at the snap of a finger...mmm it would be delicious!

Poor ending. Worse story.

There is a better ending on Smashwords version - Maid Forgotten by Gary Bingham