All Comments on 'Former Geek is Now Successful Ch. 01'

by LaPatitMort

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow

This was hot.

I could see the image come to life.

Very nice.

Can't wait for part two

sailorpaulsailorpaulover 14 years ago
Great emotional interaction

I like the interplay of the characters, and was able to see them come to life in my mind. Very hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well written

Nice imagery...very believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I love your stories don't ever stop writing

You write so sensitively and it is easy to see that you have an idea on how to love a woman completely and utterly..

you simply rock and you are fresh and original

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