All Comments on 'Four Wives'

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TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimover 10 years ago

Quite amusing with a humorous end.

Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
TOO FLAKY

The story began veering from an interesting read when other couples began showing up.

3 Star

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What a rip off

That was taken and expanded from a TV ad. Sheesh And I didn't like the ad so you can guess what the rating was here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Huh

The story veered from being an interesting read when the other couples showed up? That was line two. How vested could you have possibly been? Dear god it's not a plot change at line two it's the plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Big pile of junk.

Too many people in the pot ruined it.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 10 years ago
????

Hard to suspend belief on this one. At first blush the action seems unlikely, but considering things today it might happen. Anyway it "ain't" a bad read.

Ducky7Ducky7over 10 years ago
Hay this is fiction if I recall

This was a fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I never saw this coming...

...when I watched the Carlton beer commercials!

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