by Ashson
The story began veering from an interesting read when other couples began showing up.
3 Star
That was taken and expanded from a TV ad. Sheesh And I didn't like the ad so you can guess what the rating was here.
The story veered from being an interesting read when the other couples showed up? That was line two. How vested could you have possibly been? Dear god it's not a plot change at line two it's the plot.
Hard to suspend belief on this one. At first blush the action seems unlikely, but considering things today it might happen. Anyway it "ain't" a bad read.