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Redbird1376Redbird1376over 16 years ago
wow

My god, man...you are talented. You have really found the essence of erotic writing! I've made the mistake of reading this at work and now I have a very noticeable wet spot on the front of my pants. Well done!

I really cannot wait to read more of your work, but in an effort to keep my job, I will have to wait for now.

Thank you for quite an afternoon of reading!

~Redbird1376

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
so sweet

I really liked the cummy kisses

and being in bed with your guy and letting the sperm be all over each other

and then of coruse letting it be inside each other

THANX for the story and my HARD-ON

pwr2theblondespwr2theblondesover 13 years ago
Thank you.

So hot. Made me cum on the first page.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
okay seriously

this guy needs a happily ever after. please write a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

I really like this one I was like how could he said that but then I've been there so thanks for the trip down memory lane

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