All Comments on 'Freebie Ch. 02'

well written and great dialog all men should train there women this way

Victoriajohn,

I, for one (or, maybe two -- I saw that someone else liked it) enjoyed this and the previous chapter. There's more to it than a lot of traditional erotica -- which is why some people (not a statistically meaningful sample, mind you) don't like it. But what makes it unusual actually makes it interesting. So I ask that you publish the remaining two chapters. If they're already written, there's nothing to lose, is there? Despite any criticism you get, know that some of us definitely appreciate it. Thanks.

dont let the negatives take away from the positives... i myself enjoyed the story, i may have liked some of the others a bit better, but this still had the desired effect and was very erotic... i for one cant wait for the rest..

As always,a quality read from a quality writer.

I can`t understand why some people choose to keep reading a story when it is quite obvious which direction it is heading.

I understand that this sort of fantasy is not to every ones taste but again why read it.

The person i am aiming these comments at doesn`t like stupid people.I would suggest the person reads a paper os listens to the news. Stupidity is at all levels of society.

We all know of people in powerful positions who have used and abused it to there own ends.

Just realised that this is getting to heavy so will stop there.

All i wanted to say was that there are thousands of stories on Literotica that i don`t particularly enjoy. Like most people a few paragraphs normally tells me.Sooooooo i don`t read anymore.

Keep up the good work Victor

The sacrilegious aspects were hilarious. Got off on many of the jaunts.

What a great Story. You have such a Talent and include realy funny stuff inside your stories.

The part in which she did the math in the Club about beeing fucked 30 minutes Long by Olaf and what she will earn pre stroke gave me a good laugh. Also the part in which Garry, the asshole excuse of a husband Counts the Money or asks about the Quality of the Football tickets was funny.

5 Stars for this great Story. Ist another example of your writing skill like the one about the poor Girl and Jack and his sons.

I forgot about poor old Santa in her pussy.:) I read this Story at work and you cause my a good time dear.:)

When your "other" skills are just like your writing skills then you must be a Walking wet dream Vic.:)

Love the series so far and look forward to reading additional installments, Thank you!

Hi,

We are couples from India , we really like your stories especially Mary character and would like to chat with you and my wife done with many guys with my blessings.

please let us know how can we contact you

email id

shilpa.pathiwrtha@gmail.com

regards

Shilpa, raj

Is loving every bit of this. Please keep writin

Superb piece of work

10 Big Blazing Stars Great work. In fact I identify with hubby. Contrary to what you might think being married to a complete whore and slut is NOT that great! In fact one time after one of Karen's (the topless dancer) left I asked her, "Why do you fuck so many men?" She in turn taunted me back with "Because I like it!" So I threw a shoe at her. Fortunately it missed her but hit the sliding glass door behind her and broke it! Oh Fuck! Lost our deposit on our apt. for that. So, even tho it is exciting and a 'turn on' to have a 'hot wife' it is NOT without stress, emotions, fears, heartache, jealousy, and a ton of other emotions that come into play knowing and sometimes seeing the love of your life having enthusiastic and very enjoyable sex with other men. The truth to the matter is that once a 'hot wife' realizes that she doesn't need hubby to get her lots of other men for sex, then she doesn't need you at all. Only the remnant's of her love for you is what keeps her with you. Once a woman experiences intense pleasure with a man, an emotional bond is formed. Too much emotional bond with another man and she could easily leave you and when she does it is DEVASTATING. It is then that you realize you have invested EVERYTHING in her and you don't even have any good friends besides her and her lovers. Sharing your wife is exciting and thrilling, but so is playing Russian Roulette. Jus' Sayin' that I been there and done that, but it isn't good for your marriage. Thanks, Buster2U

Yank

According to that old saw, we're two peoples separated by a common language - My impression of good old Gerry is that he's about as worthless as tits on a tractor - OK, next chapter please . . . .