All Comments on 'Freebie Ch. 03'

i really like this freebie story. like all your stories there is excellent build up and plot. this is an intelligent story and i love the way it's going.

thanks VJ for a great read.

Loved it! I thought the story was exceptionally well written and I look forward to more work by this author. Thank you!

Yank

Well Gerry is still as fucked up as a soup sandwich - I especially liked the scene with Aioka san - I can only hope there is going to be a follow on chapter to tie up all the various strings . . . .