All Comments on 'French Lessons Ch. 02'

I could not keep track of who was who or what was where.!

More than one of anything kind of breaks up everything and I just think who is doing what and then if that so who is on third and what is the person on first doing.??

Whey.^ Never again a Jason1 did this Jason 2 did that while Jason 3 did them all.!**

While I don't think the first paragraph was needed, it was a good story. You write sex scenes well.

Good job 5*