Private fantasies played out in real time. Yes, a good start to freshman year. Would love a bit more description of the actual acts. Glossed over for the most part. A rewrite could make it even better.
I'm mature and longtime happily married. I started to write erotic fiction in the begining of Feb 2018 after reading it for a few years on e-books, and thought I have enough ideas I could write like this,then found this site and a few others of the same so had the incentive to...