by Sean943
Was this written by a chick? Gave up before it got remotely sexy or interesting. Came here horned up; not even in the mood now. Your writing is as sexy as a 90 year old narrator, which is to say not at all.
The mistakes in spelling, grammar, sentence structure and phrasing made this story unreadable. It got worse as it went along. By the second page, I had to stop. Too frustrated and confusing to continue.
We have all experienced this but the question this time is are you a Friend or a Predator.