by Goldguppie123
There were many grammar errors so u might want to consider an editor. But other than that this was an excellent beginning if a very good story. I really enjoyed the characters and I can't wait to read how he will finally get past that friend zone.
5 stars.
Looking forward to more of this tale. Enjoying what you've written thus far.
Enjoyed the story so far. But I do agree with the other comments about typos and an editor. Basic things like Caps on names and at he beginning of sentences. Would make your stories a lot better.