by m_storyman_x
That was HOT! Even my Texans can't write them any hotter than that. Wow! I'm glad I got rid of all the cigarettes in the house years ago! I could sure use a smoke right now!
Hard to wait for the next episode. And I may still be! LOL!
Well done indeed!
Cheers
SAGE
I absolutely love that the series has now crossed over to the Incest/Taboo category! Five stars and a favorite point!
Loved it. Really love to read about him having impregnated both his daughter and her girlfriend, and seeing what kind of new family dynamics they might create, with two more young ‘fertile’ wives in the family.
I really try and overlook most small mistakes but you seriously need to either proof-read much better or get an editor/proof-reader to go over your work. the amount of mistakes in this story seriously detracts from what is other wise a good tale. I think you owe it to yourself to look into this matter. 3 stars on an other wise 4 star story.
Jack’s is obviously a mature STUD! The way all the women want to experience him. The count is up to 6 I believe. Mandy obviously has awakened her Peak Sexual Maturity and is wanting to make up for a vanilla life style after marrying Jack. Jack’s moral values are being shamed by all this. Thank You and looking forward to reading all of the remaining chapters of this Hot Erotic Story!