All Comments on 'Frisky Business'

Very nice, even without the sex.

still takes money to buy a cup of coffee, TK U MLJ LV NV

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Good read and I hope you continue this story soon.

really enjoyed the plot, characters and quality writing. adult club scene was extremely erotic, look forward to more from you in this section :) Thanks! :) Smiling Jaybird :)

I read this one, then went back and tore through your older ones as well. You have a gift for writing feel-good stories with believable characters and situations, and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

I'm not sure what you mean by, "still takes money to buy a cup of coffee"

I really enjoyed the story, but the ending felt very abrupt.

This story is going to hit every ordinary, unexciting guy (like me) right in that magical spot where his imagination takes him just before he falls asleep at night. I think it's the feel-good story of all time. Thank you for sharing it with us.

You write very well. The complex business in the star's dressing room was wonderful. I enjoyed the interplay between the real woman and her on-stage alter ego. What was clever was the way her flitting from one personality to the other seemed to bring out a more poised, cool side of the man. So what seemed at first like a very simple story, really wasn't. You played your hand like a veteran poker shark. I can imagine you typing your stories wearing a green eyeshade.

I'm delighted to have found a delightful story and another writer whose work I enjoy. You've found a place in my favorites list, amid some heavy hitters. Please keep up the good work!

3 stars. Ending was too brief and leaves the reader hanging.

This one needs to continue.

The build up was fantastic. The ending to quick to do justice to the story. This definitely needs a continuation. How does the romance continue with her as a stripper? Get married? Lots of good details to work out. Look forward to the rest of the story. Thank you

A lovely love story with spice! Another pure five. Thank you again for a very engaging story. Much appreciated. jntiques

and a really big tease.

well done.

Great plausible love story.

Life really is much more than gratuitous unloving sex

Keep up the theme you are doing best in.

A romantic gem but wasn't fully convinced of why she fell for him so quickly.

Also,considering all of the men she'd met at the club,I'd have to think that she'd banged a few in the past year. Her business is teasing while stripping.Besides turning the guys on,she had to get turned on herself more than a few times. Just found it hard to believe that she hadn't played "Hide the Salami" with at least a few guys when she was explaining why she hadn't needed to take the pill for a year.

Bottom line though is that it was great to read about a regular Joe finding romance with a beautiful,sexy woman! (Rated this story 5).

A delightful story with a promise to any single man’s fantasy. Well done. Thank you.

But I realized before "Monday", that I really wanted to know if she got the loan. You write erotica, but the story was well told. Ten stars. signed 87 year old widower.

How was a demonstration of her stripping going to answer his question about how she planned to continue to keep up the mortgage payments in the future when she was 20 years older and either not stripping anymore or not making as much doing it?

Another great love story with some very good sex thrown in to add to the enjoyment. The only part where I stumbled a little was Monday when they were in bed getting ready to bury the bone. How in the world did he get a rubber on without her knowing it? Maybe a slight of hand trick like Houdini or did he wear it to the party and she just didn't notice it? Not that big of a deal, I still enjoyed the banter between the two and gave the story the five stars it earned. Thanks

Needs a sequel to be anything other than an "Erotic Coupling" story.

Very enjoyable love story. Great writing.

Just another great story don’t know how you do it but please keep making my days better. Great work and alsom writing.

Very vivid.

Well done.

I loved this so much. Thank you

What a surprise ! I just knew this wasn't going to end well . You have just restored my faith in girlkind . Thanx !

Well done. Well written, well thought out, and I liked it. Thanks for a great read.

Very well done. Better editing than some of the others but all I've read are very good. This one was excellent.