by asianToy
i love this tale. The fuck machine scene is hot. Love the new character!
Asian chicks are hot!
I was totally surprised by the new character, I like her far more than the masseuse or the dressing consultants, glad to see her build from the possibilities that they had opened, and, hoping she is going to get more exposure here
Who are you that you have all of this knowledge of mechanics, computers, and fucking?
I love it all.
You could make Ai a whole novel in itself!!! Good, great, hot writing!!!
I love how much you obviously had to research in order to write this chapter. As usual, it was great story-telling.
As one other asked: Who are you that you know all this stuff!?
You blow my mind, this story is really taking off in potential - both good and scarily bad. I need sleep but I want to find out 'what's next' :)
I'll have to be satisfied with reading some more during break lol
Thanks again for sharing your talent,
J
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