All Comments on 'From Jenny to Mei Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story

i love this tale. The fuck machine scene is hot. Love the new character!

Asian chicks are hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yes, the new character with the engineering facets, is a delight

I was totally surprised by the new character, I like her far more than the masseuse or the dressing consultants, glad to see her build from the possibilities that they had opened, and, hoping she is going to get more exposure here

virtual_lovervirtual_loverover 9 years ago

Thank you yet again.

VanessaNelsonVanessaNelsonover 9 years ago
Holy hell

Who are you that you have all of this knowledge of mechanics, computers, and fucking?

I love it all.

divermikedivermikeover 9 years ago
Wow!!!

You could make Ai a whole novel in itself!!! Good, great, hot writing!!!

dan_kildalldan_kildallabout 9 years ago
Research

I love how much you obviously had to research in order to write this chapter. As usual, it was great story-telling.

JasonRTaylorJasonRTayloralmost 9 years ago
Seriously!?

As one other asked: Who are you that you know all this stuff!?

You blow my mind, this story is really taking off in potential - both good and scarily bad. I need sleep but I want to find out 'what's next' :)

I'll have to be satisfied with reading some more during break lol

Thanks again for sharing your talent,

J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
beyond comprehension

the quality of the word craft

the knowledge base needed

.........

that this story has not been viewed more times

that the vote / score is not higher

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I've hit the mother of all writer's blocks. Not that I don't write, I do, maybe too much. The issue is that I get to a point in a story and can't find the motivation to work through the issues. The harder I work and the more I press myself the more my passion is sapped and ...

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