All Comments on 'From Loss to Love'

by intenserider

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What happens next?

A second chapter please.

navelmannavelmanover 11 years ago
amazing narration

thanx intenserider for a great story u have used a very powerful narration style to create the utmost feeling of thrill with the kinkiest stuff, the mom son incest great work bro

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
what's with

What's.....with.....all....the.....frequent.....use.....of "......."

mcbtwsmcbtwsover 11 years ago
Good story

I liked it.

BiskitBiskitover 11 years ago
EROTIC

Very nice. I got off on it despite all of your poor grammer. Don't you have spell check? My gosh, it's I, not i. Anyway, you do have a nice touch with the story line and anytime I can cum to a hot but overdone incest story is fine with me. Look for an editor next time.

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 11 years ago

An excellent and well written story, very erotic too. I'm sure there's room for a follow up chapter here.

bigmac359bigmac359over 11 years ago
Well Done!

I enjoyed this story very much. It was an excellent first effort. You have a knack for getting the readers to empathize and identify with your characters. Please continue this lovely storyline. As far as detractors go, ignore them and continue to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yes

Very nicely done. Just as it might be in real life. Thank you.

satyrangelsatyrangelover 11 years ago
Excellent work.

Please continue! I really liked your gentle touch with the characters and the time taken with the love making.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
a terrific story!

A boy blowing his balls up his own mother's mommy-hole is a beautiful thing.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
good story

good hot gentle sex, nicely written with nice characters thanks

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