by intenserider
thanx intenserider for a great story u have used a very powerful narration style to create the utmost feeling of thrill with the kinkiest stuff, the mom son incest great work bro
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Very nice. I got off on it despite all of your poor grammer. Don't you have spell check? My gosh, it's I, not i. Anyway, you do have a nice touch with the story line and anytime I can cum to a hot but overdone incest story is fine with me. Look for an editor next time.
An excellent and well written story, very erotic too. I'm sure there's room for a follow up chapter here.
I enjoyed this story very much. It was an excellent first effort. You have a knack for getting the readers to empathize and identify with your characters. Please continue this lovely storyline. As far as detractors go, ignore them and continue to write.
Please continue! I really liked your gentle touch with the characters and the time taken with the love making.
A boy blowing his balls up his own mother's mommy-hole is a beautiful thing.
good hot gentle sex, nicely written with nice characters thanks