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Click hereI've taken Hessa to one of our churches, and much to my amazement, over time she lost her cynicism towards all things religious and came to see Christianity as a beautiful faith built on tolerance and forgiveness. We're a community and a family, and we care for each other. That's what our savior Jesus Christ taught the world. If some Christians appoint themselves judges over others, they're not doing what Christianity is all about. Only God can judge. Christians are imperfect but Jesus Christ is wonderful and His teachings are a valid path for mankind to follow. Of her own volition, Hessa came to embrace Christianity, and we were married in a wonderful ceremony a while ago. This life has taken me through all kinds of hell but without these trials and tribulations, I wouldn't have my sweet ( and dangerous ) Hessa or our wonderful son Israel. My life would be empty without them. I thank the Creator for His blessings. Peace.
...Qatar with Love"? That's like the cut/paste "From Laval with Love."
Another commenter said it best: take a basic writing class. Garbage in story that does nothing to contribute anything meaningful. 1*
And the sadest thing is that the only creative and interesting writing in all of your stories are the comments...mostly negative. Even the very disteastfull porn add is a bit more interesting than the whole thing I'm sure....well just guessing must admit that I just read the comments....some people are very clever. About youas a writer the positive thing I have to say is that you are very very prolifoc and resiliant.
You mentioned more places in this piece of crap than I've seen since a geography book! They did nothing to further the story, but you included them anyway. Why not take a break and enroll in a basic writing class?