by SirAuthor
Great story. Couples having "fun" together, without some poor guy getting cucked. Many thanks, Cheers.
So I'm glad I went back and read the preface for part one because I realized just now I read the original. I don't remember all of the original series but I definitely feel I have liked this one better so far.
Well-written, enticing story, but I fear for the couple's fate. They just experienced their first swap, and James had a lot of concerns. But then James and Jan immediately consider seducing the newlywed couple! I see problems ahead in the marriage of the MC! Still, 5 stars.
Practically everything I have to say I said i/c/w the first installment. BUT let me add (1) that your descriptions of sexual encounters are vivid and (3) that the standard of craftsmanship you exhibit in these two chapters is better than in your later works. Whatever you did here you should repeat in the future.
One last thing: please take note of the difference between "heal" and "heel."