by Goldeniangel
Still amazing writing, arousing to the last detail. I am very happy she got her brother. Even if he is always questioning motives. Zyander and Chyrssa are together and in totally love and happiness. So is this reader..
This cannot..... absolutely can not be the last chapter.. I refuse to believe that
It can't be over! It was getting really good! There's so many things we didn't get to see. I'd like to see what Zyander's children are like and so many other things! This was a super sexy and intriguing story. I really hope you consider doing a sequel.
Though I could read about those two forever, this was a satisfying ending. Any chance of an epilogue or sequel?If so, I'd be thrilled. If not, there's enough here for me to dream up my own.
I'm assuming she'll let her brother go but that somehow he'll find the way back to her. In my own romantic, optimistic world, there's some way for terrans and lickens to overcome the whole sterility/incompatibility thing and they'll have a cute little family. Sigh.
Thanks for writing. I love every work of yours I've read and I'm looking forward to whatever story you give us next.
Absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed Chryssa and Zyanders passion and seduction from start to finish.
I hope we can get her brother's perspective next ;)
I'm glad everyone enjoyed this series so much, I had a lot of fun with Zyander and Chryssa, but I am looking forward to working on something else for a while now. I will say, I have purposefully left it open-ended enough that, while I'm happy with their ending, I could always pick it up again at a later date. It's also possible I will eventually write a sequel starring Jed's character, although I'm not interested in doing it right now. But the possibilities are always there =) Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
I loved it from start to end, and it just kept getting better and better! Thanks for sharing this with us! One of my favorites!
I would have to say this is one of the best stories on Lit., and now that it has come to an end, I'm sad. I really do hope that sometime in the NOT too distant future, Zyander and Chryssa's journey continues. :)
I love this series. LOL. Wished i was in her situation..... Lucky Bitch.......
I don't know whether to say.... FUCKING AWESOME or AWESOME FUCKING!!!
I always read the comments although I don't always choose to respond =) I appreciate the people who take the time to give feedback! So thank you for yours!
Hey Goldeniangel, I wanted to let you know what a refreshing change your writing is from the usual "I'm a harem gathering stud who gets the willies when I think about someone else with MY women, much less *sharing* them."
You could probably put at least this chapter in the romance category as well...
Keep up the good work; I look forward to reading more of your fine crafting.
Great Set up, Build ups, and Climaxes too, all while still keeping it going! besides one hiccup I had found before the whole story flows very well, I probably only noticed it lol cause I read em all in one sitting. Amazing Story, Good Background for more in this Realm(allways harder to set up) and Good and Variable SexScenes that didn't end up with me Skipping Sex for more Story lol(happened afew times)
Keep Up the Great Work and Don't Lose the Fun from the Writing!
-Revol
I thought in the past the licken was said to have no balls. Then in the three some he had some? Did I confuse the race or was that a slight mix up on the story? Either way I loved the story. Thank you for the awesome read. :)
As noted by daywalker, there was a slight continuity issue with Zyander's physiology.
GA forgot her alien was nutless.
As one of my favourite authors here, it almost seems ungrateful to mention it.
Thanks for a great read. I've seriously paid for lesser grade books on Amazon numerous times and really enjoy your work.
Very enjoyable! The erotic scenes, especially the variations between the aliens, were well written and quite imaginative. Thanks for the good time.
I don't think I've ever read a story so fast, I loved every second of this one! Can't wait to read some more of your work! This story is one of my favorites
Read the whole series in one sitting! New favorite that has me craving more alien love.
It took me two days to finish this series and I can't say how much I love it!!! Is there going to be another story featuring Brik?
I loved the story too, the testicles can be easily explained away... the story is from Chryssa's point of view, no one explained anything at all to her at the beginning and they are aliens, so visible testicles could have had something to do with hierarchy, status, situation, temperature, diet, lighting, month, or a million other factors.
However, I also noticed a few other small, albeit less easy to explain continuity errors but I just assumed they came from the 8 or so years that lapsed between the author writing the first few chapters and the rest of the story.... it's rather understandable how that wasn't a perfectly seamless transition. I was just very grateful that she returned to it at all after such a long hiatus, which I'm sure that was not an easy undertaking...
Was Jed's story ever written?
Absolutely the a great read all the way through !!! Strong sexy characters that stay consistent. Great storyline that stays on track. Only thing I’d have liked more of was when she found her brother and their reunion. But other than that it was fantastic!!!!
You are such a great writer!!!! I love this story so much I have read it multiple
times!! Keep them coming please!