All Comments on 'From Trophy Wife to Slutwife Ch. 05'

by THIRDCOAST

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Boring

Give it a rest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Going in a circle.

I bet if you if you changed a word or two and maybe a paragraph you could resubmit it and call it a new chapter. Or maybe that's what you're already doing?

kennyboy82kennyboy82about 9 years ago

Jesus, this is just fucking fantastic - ignore the trolls and critics, this is the real thing!

THIRDCOASTTHIRDCOASTabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks Kenny. You see that I do. He doesn't write any stories himself, just crap about something he can't do himself......lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
like this

Like what I've read. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
i'm begging you...

by my rereading (because i worried i had missed something) you have 12 chapters here. so if 'chapter 6' comes up next, i've already read 12 chapters, i'll likely miss what is a great story. can the next be listed as PART 6 if you don't want to sequentially number the chapters within each piece?!?!

in any case, keep them coming... when my angst is i missed a part and had to go back and reread, you're doing great!

THIRDCOASTTHIRDCOASTalmost 9 years agoAuthor

Each installment is a different short story, so they can't sequential. When you write your stories, feel free to list them all in a sequential order and I will read them.

silent_submissive114silent_submissive114about 6 years ago

It says to be continued there, so where's part 6? Haha ^-^

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A wild, totally kinky story, Thirdcoast. Very enjoyable, and it took care of me nicely. I'll check out more your writing.

NicoDevianteNicoDevianteabout 2 years ago

Hot! Being a slut myself, a faggot slut, I totally identify with Karen, even if I like my sex raunchier and harder. It's the first of your stories I read, and sure I'll keep on reading the others in your list. Thank you for making me very horny!

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