All Comments on 'Fucked Ch. 01: The Interview'

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fd8984596fd8984596almost 4 years ago

What a great read - NICE to see you posting again!

louiseacdlouiseacdalmost 4 years ago
wholly shit

id love to interview her myself,,,,, everyday

betabradbetabradalmost 4 years ago
Loved It !

So sexy ! I really identified with Dom and I would love to meet a gurl like Jessica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
5 stars

Glad to see you writing again. Fantastic story, so much better than anything that’s been posted in this category lately. Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Your writing might be more hurtful than you realize

I’m bringing this up before someone tears your throat out over it. A lot of descriptions and comments are dehumanizing your female lead. Many of them boil down to “she’s hot despite being trans”. I’m sure you are not trans yourself or have trans friends, this kind of attitude basically says “you will never actually be the gender you associate with”. Esp this part:

“ If this was a woman, he'd have found her super attractive... In fact he had to admit that she was stunning regardless”

You use female pronouns throughout the story. Your words here contradict that, that she can’t be a “real woman” bc shes trans.

I’m not trans, I cannot speak for trans people, and trans readers’ input should be valued above mine bc I do not know what it means to live as a trans individual. I can say I have close friends who are and help me understand the attitude you take with your trans character is demeaning and fetishistic. I don’t believe anyone sets out to be mean, but I do believe everyone’s responsible for learning not to be mean.

thereshegoes123thereshegoes123almost 4 years agoAuthor

Hey thanks for the love everyone, and acknowledging the earlier comment, I originally added a prologue explanation that the guy was basically written from that uneducated point of view, and was derogatory towards trans women. He aims to have his audience laugh at her, not with her. However part of his character arc over many stories would be changing his blinkered views in light of Jessica's character. I do not in any way share the views of the character as he is now, and I had a nightmare uploading this story to literotica so I forgot to add that prologue back in. But thank you for bringing it up, and it's definitely something that should be brought up if they are the actual views of the writer/creator. It was a purposeful decision to make his character mean, as it seems to reflect a lot of online bloggers/videographers when they try to be vindictive or tear down others. He is not a person who understands Trans people, perhaps I will reupload with the original prologue, but honestly it took ages for Literotica to let it go up in the first place because of their submission system. I hope this clears up the intentions of the writing, and doesn't present itself as a way to treat Trans people x - TSG123

torcoolguytorcoolguyalmost 4 years ago
Futa vs trans

She really should just be futa, the conflation of futa and trans is pretty fetishistically antithetical to most fans of futa. For a lot of them it's a big turnoff and is either an unnecessary complication or flat out disgusting.

Further, this work leans pretty heavily into the 'futa is bigger' futa on trap trope of futa works, it's even labeled as such, and actual trans women typically wish to be treated like cis women and being the pinnacle of a masculine sexual position and aggressively pounding boi anus is quite a far cry from being feminine and pursued by men.

So the work is at once an improper oversexualization of trans women in a way that is typically opposite and counter to how they wish to be conceived, and spitting in the face of normal futa fans who dislike the conflation.

People care about the distinction for a reason. Please don't just flick labels around.

Regardless great work, super hot.

BambiBimbetteBambiBimbettealmost 4 years ago
Incredibly well written

A writer paints with words and this painting is awesome. Both Jessica and Dom ,intentional irony, are given form, substance, and life without overwriting. The progression of control being taken is natural, boy outlandish. I was anticipating Jessica exercising control over Dom’s attire because of the story description, twink, but I loved where it went and how it got there. As a school assignment this would be an A++. If you do a sequel I’ll read it immediately. If you don’t I’ll probably reread this many more times. Well done!

phoenixcindersphoenixcindersalmost 4 years ago
Great Story!

I totally got what you were going for with a naive interviewer who's not well educated on the subject going for laughs. It's the typical Youtuber kind of personality. I love it! You hit the nail on the head. I love Jessica as well. Very mysterious. I hope you there's a part 2. Would love to see where you take it from here.

phoenixcindersphoenixcindersalmost 4 years ago
Great Story

So the main protag is a bit uneducated about trans women. That's typical for most people. I totally understand the aim Thereshegoes is going for. And as far as the whole futa vs trans, I think this is perfect the way it is. Jessica is based off of a Trans pornstar. Most trans pornstars come off as dominant tops. A character shouldn't be judged on who they are at the beginning of the story, but who they become when the story is finished. Great story Thereshegoes! Keep it up.

MamalidoMamalidoalmost 4 years ago
Glad you are back!

It's very good to see you writing again. If you are worried about people getting offended over this, might i suggest you using the term "Futa" for your characters? Since the futa is a fuctional term you'd have much more open hand in your writings.

Right now the trans is a very sensitive subject and honestly there is no winning in this game. Even if your terms are perfect and not in anyway degrading, there is always someone finds it offending.

And it would be a shame to see you not writing anymore because of that. You're one of my few favourite futa/trans writers.

DarktidingsDarktidingsalmost 4 years ago
superb :)

really enjoyed this one, looking forward to reading more of your work !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
great story

great to see you writing again. really good story. loved the set up and detail. looking forward to your next one!

illwindillwindover 3 years ago

Thought it was great, until all the humiliation started. Who cares about his ex girlfriend?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Will there be a part 2? Loved the humiliatio

thereshegoes123thereshegoes123over 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks everyone!

Appreciate the love everyone, if you enjoyed it, check out my site in the bio, it has exclusive stories, early access and more, much love! x - TSG123

EronymousEronymousover 3 years ago

Probably one of the best fics I've ever read! It seriously ticked every box I have. Thank you for writing!

totostorytotostoryabout 3 years ago
brilliant as always

Well, the build up and sex scene was great as always.I love details and I love tge brutal fuck with different positions, you described that so good as I watched porn movie. Anyway I know it is fiction ,but only two thing I dislike generally not only your stories but either of other Authors, I hope the site's administrators create a separate section for TS or moved it to gay section. well the first thing is the word Tran instead of futa because when I read Trans or TS I fell like a man with fake boobs and wearing makeup ,I am not gay and I dislike gay stories and I think it is better to using Futa word instead of TS as it feels normal that girl born with total woman body with something extra ( a dick). the second thing is the oversized of body and the dick , dick size till 7 inches is ok ,more is really painful and the body should be feminine, I think that is more sexy, also why should be the guy dick so small? ,I think it would be Ok if he has 5 or 6 inches dick.

Finally I hope my opinion didn't bothered you, and Man please keep writing, thank you for your great works.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Annoyed

The minute I saw the words trans when I was searching for futa I stopped reading. Tag your stories properly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"SUCH" a "FANTASTIC-STORY"!!! "Mmmmmm"!!! i "ALMOST-WISHED", that i had been "HIM"!!! "Mmmmmm"!!! i "ONLY-WISH" that "HE" had been "FED" a "REALLY-BIG-DRINK", of "SWEET", "WARM" & "OH-SOO-CREAMY", "CUMMY-MILK"!!! "Mmmmmm"!!! "Mmmmmm"!!! "Mmmmmm"!!! "YOU"R-LOVING" & "OH-SOO", "VERY-THIRSTY-DADDY", "Artie"

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More of a rape story really. I have seen another comment on another dominant trans story about the writers of dominany trans stories trying to blunt the brutal rape by having the victim feel " the pain went away, replaced by pleasure", uh no. You dont suddenly go for the anal tearing of a fully shafted virgin ass to pleasure. Especially with these giant fictional penises. Look, i know its a story. I enjoy dominant trand sub guy stories, but not when the sub is demeaned or abused. If this story were real, he'd need an er visit to have his anus/colon stitched up.

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peteh57peteh57about 2 years ago

Wow. So super hot. What a great sexy story. I haven’t noticed if theirs a sequel yet but I’m about to go looking…

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a reposted story…..read it before weeks ago!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’ve read this before somewhere? Repost?

thereshegoes123thereshegoes123over 1 year agoAuthor

Hi all, this is a repost! (there's just a new chapter that's been posted, and the literotica admins very kindly organised my series because I hadn't done it properly, hence why the old stories have come up, the 3rd chapter to this story - 'Nightcap' is up now on my profile!)

awyldsideawyldsideover 1 year ago

Great story. I love the dominant ts

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn sooo hot! Dreams fulfilled…

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Man, I was loving this until the cuckold and humiliation stuff :(

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This was just painful to read, she sounds like an absolutely toxic person and I pity anyone who has to be around someone like that...

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Make a story about the girlfriend meeting the Ts and humiliating the guy

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